-- NOT INTERACTIVE -- This is my 2nd comic --- If People like it enough I'll continue it.
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C&R Please
If he only needs the hard drive, why is he getting the entire tower?
[QUOTE=PrismatexV6;16335003]If he only needs the hard drive, why is he getting the entire tower?[/QUOTE]
Like I said--- the alarm went off causing them to rush--- they didnt havn't enough time.
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Good god a none interactive comic?
On Facepunch!?
Good lord...
All jokes aside its a fair start, the layout needs some work and the tails of the speech bubbles are too jagged for my liking.
And the seems to be a slow burner so don't go rushing a head with the story.
[QUOTE=Chrisordie;16335088]Good god a none interactive comic?
On Facepunch!?
Good lord...
All jokes aside its a fair start, the layout needs some work and the tails of the speech bubbles are too jagged for my liking.
And the seems to be a slow burner so don't go rushing a head with the story.[/QUOTE]
ok noted
You really need to work on your posing and overall editing. Also, the story line is simply very dumb. I'm not making jokes out of you, but work on a more prominent project with an interesting plot line that makes the readers interested to ask for more and like the comic as well.
Looks good!
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