I would apologise for the long wait, but I think people have come to expect that of me by now. I spent several months without a usable computer, even after I got it fixed real life proved too distracting.
A lot of reading to do in this episode, stick with it since it explains many of the important details of the series, and next episode will have more action, concluding the first arc of the story.
Keeping the movie poster-themed title cards going, this issue's is based on Plan 9 From Outer Space.
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Well, that was a strange experience.
[B]Nanomachines[/B]
Awesome!
Quite an interesting plot, I look forward to more!
Amazing. Make more please! :D
It was pretty good.
I did find it strange, however, that she spills her guts about just about everything; [b]then[/b] says she doesn't want to involve him. It just seemed odd.
Plus, she reminds me of Liara T'soni from Mass Effect. :/
But, overall, not a bad comic. I look forward to the next one.
I liked it but the angles and posing could use a little more life y'know
i'm not sure how to add it myself but yeah
it looked really good towards the end though
:bravo:
I saw a new episode of BraneWorlds and I metaphorically squealed like a schoolgirl.
Metaphorically, of course. Cough. :colbert:
However, the typo in "specimens" somehow greatly lessened the cohesion of the story for me. That one little typo (the only one I caught, may I add) just glared like a red flag to me. I know it's being incredibly nitpicky, but I can't help but notice these things.
You weren't kidding when you said it was text-heavy though.
[b]Also![/b]
By chance, were those three worlds you used to describe the different level membranes actual Source levels? If so, could I have the names of them? They all look like fun, particularly the Borderlands world. :buddy:
This was beautiful, you must continue it, don't understand why this doesn't have 100 ratings
Civilization. With a Z.
Otherwise, pretty good, but try to show, and not tell, in some cases. Comic books don't usually have walls of text covering entire pages.
We need him to travel to her homeworld.
[QUOTE=Gmod4ever;26057966]By chance, were those three worlds you used to describe the different level membranes actual Source levels? If so, could I have the names of them? They all look like fun, particularly the Borderlands world.[/QUOTE]
The maps used there are dys_cybernetic from the Dystopia mod, de_crookcounty and gm_skylife, you should be able to find them around.
Apologies for all the typos, sometimes I miss things when I'm checking through it.
[QUOTE=fury_161;26060333]Civilization. With a Z.[/QUOTE]
That one isn't a typo. I'm British, we spell it with an S.
[QUOTE=HazLife;26060700]That one isn't a typo. I'm British, we spell it with an S.[/QUOTE]
Gah, it just looks so wrong!
I was anticipating for the next sequel of BraneWorlds, and here it is.
It has not disappointed me one single bit, I loved the humor in the comic itself, as far as I know the story is solid and very intriguing.. And very original.
Posing. It's good but rather..Lifeless, it's like they're just standing there and use next to no body movement, it's a small issue that I barely noticed, but still worth taking note of.
I like how you use early episodes to build up a plot. Not many comic makers these days do.
What I am about to type down probably has already been written, but fuck it.
I am in love with the story and lore and whatnot. Especially the characters. This comic's so awesome I spilled my coffee on Chuck Norris, who roundhouse kicked me through the Earth BraneWorld and into some unknown Braneworld. Hot damn...
But alas, nothing is perfect. I spotted a few spelling errors here and there, and the posing, as mentioned before, could use a little life. Then there are the speech bubbles. I think they're quite confusing, as in what order I need to read it in. But hey, I'm pretty sure that's personal preference.
MOAR!!!11elevenone!1!
Thanks for all the feedback, your comments help me see whant I need to improve.
I'll make sure to work on posing and better speechbubble structure for the next episode.
This my good man is quite an exquisite read. As already stated, the specimens typo stood out quite a lot for some reason, my guess is because everything else is so good that even a small bump is noticable.
One thing that you could do with walls of text is to use more illustrations of the subject they cover. Like when 27 tells about the membrane travel, have a pic where someone does just that.
The only thing that I might not liked was that she said that she wighs 1 ton, I found that rather overkill and waterd down. Like, how do those wooden satirs and floor hold so much mass when all the pressure is on so little space. 400kg I could live with, a ton? Mnaaaah.
Also, scourge, WC3 reference much? Interdimensional monsters n all :)
great work , this is so good it keeps me want to read more and more
An interesting sci-fi tale, quite cool.
I like it, has a good plot to it.
OH MY GOD! DO I SEE AN ACTUAL COMIC?
More than speech bubbles and cross-eyed random-faced morons flailing their arms around for sure.
This is more interesting than when I watched chuck norris divide by zero...
[QUOTE=Minelayer;26127961]OH MY GOD! DO I SEE AN ACTUAL COMIC?
More than speech bubbles and cross-eyed random-faced morons flailing their arms around for sure.
This is more interesting than when I watched chuck norris divide by zero...[/QUOTE]
It's obvious you haven't been around here for a lot. Back in the day, well-made comics like this were everyday sightings...
:sigh: I miss that wonderful, golden age...
this? this shit is brilliant.
2008 layout with some mediocre editing, but god damn is it entertaining
it is
Pretty cracking stuff, are you by any chance an aspiring novelist?
[QUOTE=jimhowl33t;26136736]It's obvious you haven't been around here for a lot. Back in the day, well-made comics like this were everyday sightings...
:sigh: I miss that wonderful, golden age...[/QUOTE]
You do not know how long I have been here. My join date is not my arrival date :ninja:
Hazlifes best comic to date. Good story but i want to see some more humor. Also maybe a famous phrase that lewton can say. Other than that brilliant comic i particularly liked the shot of the different membranes that looked cool.
Definitely a good read. :D
[QUOTE=Egevened;26137457]2008 layout with some mediocre editing, but god damn is it entertaining[/QUOTE]
Yeah. Sure brings back memories.
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