Being Watched by.... - Garry's Mod

This is my first Comic guys so Give me your best opinion about it. Also i rate someone a winner if you name the person at the end so enjoy. Also fixed the pics and enlarge them for Good quality :) [URL=http://www.cubeupload.com/img/ac40dgmconstructconsp000.jpg][IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/thumbs/th.ac40dgmconstructconsp000.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.cubeupload.com/img/22c99bgmconstructconsp000.jpg][IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/thumbs/th.22c99bgmconstructconsp000.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.cubeupload.com/img/d70f72gmconstructconsp000.jpg][IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/thumbs/th.d70f72gmconstructconsp000.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.cubeupload.com/img/5a674dgmconstructconsp000.jpg][IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/thumbs/th.5a674dgmconstructconsp000.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.cubeupload.com/img/41283bgmconstructconsp000.jpg][IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/thumbs/th.41283bgmconstructconsp000.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.cubeupload.com/img/a8baa8gmconstructconsp000.jpg][IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/thumbs/th.a8baa8gmconstructconsp000.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.cubeupload.com/img/11939cgmconstructconsp001.jpg][IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/thumbs/th.11939cgmconstructconsp001.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.cubeupload.com/img/f71ecfgmconstructconsp001.jpg][IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/thumbs/th.f71ecfgmconstructconsp001.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.cubeupload.com/img/416c10gmconstructconsp001.jpg][IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/thumbs/th.416c10gmconstructconsp001.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://www.cubeupload.com/img/c238efgmconstructconsp001.jpg][IMG]http://www.cubeupload.com/files/thumbs/th.c238efgmconstructconsp001.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

Use filesmelt Get a spellchecker. work on posing, turn graphics up

[QUOTE=dale_uk_scout;26409673]Use filesmelt Get a spellchecker. work on posing, turn graphics up[/QUOTE] Yeah i don't think a spellchecker is gonna happen.

Ever considered turning all the images into 1?

[QUOTE=minilandstan;26415215]Ever considered turning all the images into 1?[/QUOTE] I always throught that would be difficult so not really.

I would give better criticism if I wouldn't have to open up a shitton of seperate pictures to read a poorly posed comic. It's not hard to do, simply just figure out what the length of your comic will be by using a calculator. Multiply the length by the number of panals and you got pretty much the size of the whole comic. This is best to do because people generally dislike opening many photos, specially when they all are thumbed. The parts I did look at had bad posing. Practice a bit more with your posing, and try to stay away from construct unless the situation really calls for it (IE the comic takes place in Gmod or something). Make sure to turn your graphics up too. One final thing, try and get dropbox. It's great for hosting comics, and it's accessible from your standard computer harddrive. I suggest staying away from filesmelt because not only does it go down alot, over time it sometimes deletes and replaces pictures. Some older threads using file smelt hosting have a random assortment of photos now. So Drobbox is probably you best bet

[QUOTE=doomevil;26415334]I always throught that would be difficult so not really.[/QUOTE] you're denying criticism jesus christ all your comics are going to be shit if you keep doing that also, xD randumb at the end does not make your story funny

[QUOTE=Ehm;26416493]you're denying criticism jesus christ all your comics are going to be shit if you keep doing that also, xD randumb at the end does not make your story funny[/QUOTE] It wasn't ment to be funny at all at the end. And honestly i was denying criticism since i thought it would be bad(I was right) at my first comic but i guess i should get advise first before making another one.

[QUOTE=doomevil;26417504]It wasn't ment to be funny at all at the end. And honestly i was denying criticism since i thought it would be bad(I was right) at my first comic but i guess i should get advise first before making another one.[/QUOTE] If it sucks and you know it sucks ask questions and advise BEFORE posting if you don't want to feel insulted.