• The Traitor.
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Had this idea for a long time now. [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10001.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10003.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10005.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10006.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10007.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10008.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10011.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10012.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10013.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10014.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10015.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10016.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10018.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10021.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10022.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10024.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10025.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10026.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10027.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10028.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10029.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10030.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10031.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10032.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10033.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10034.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10035.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10036.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10037.jpg[/img] [img]http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r281/Shogun17/rp_c18_v10042.jpg[/img] -Soldiér|17th.UK| Don't bash my work for "editing" reasons. If you're gonna bash it atleast give me tips on how to improve it (although I know most people will give me tips because they think they're god at posing and their shit don't stink). This is for entertainment reasons as I see it.
[img]http://upl.luahelp.com/uploads/DypgxZFJ/yourcomic.jpg[/img]
Lens flare.
The lens flare made me vomit in rage. The story sucks too!
[QUOTE=VoiDeD;16485318]Lens flare.[/QUOTE] [img]http://upl.luahelp.com/uploads/bRQibqte/yourlensflare.jpg[/img]
Last time I checked this is the GMOD forums for GMOD comics, not photoshop forums. Sorry if I don't put much time into editing because I don't think it's neccessary. Don't reply if you're just gonna bash my work.
Ignore above comments. Well, the fact that you used NPC's is a no-no. However, the poses of the guy doing the backflip in the air look promising. However, there's a lot of room for improvement. Also, the overdone "zoom out" is unnecessary, and expanding a plot a bit further wouldn't do bad. And that plaza is damn empty. :v: In general, I can see some potential in it. I suggest starting with less ambitious comics first, involving only a few characters and all. Also, improving editing...You can play around with colours and whatever. Also, there are various tutorials in the "comic making tutorials/comic lists" thread, put them to good use.
[QUOTE=Géza!;16487169]Ignore above comments. Well, the fact that you used NPC's is a no-no. However, the poses of the guy doing the backflip in the air look promising. However, there's a lot of room for improvement. Also, the overdone "zoom out" is unnecessary, and expanding a plot a bit further wouldn't do bad. And that plaza is damn empty. :v: In general, I can see some potential in it. I suggest starting with less ambitious comics first, involving only a few characters and all. Also, improving editing...You can play around with colours and whatever. Also, there are various tutorials in the "comic making tutorials/comic lists" thread, put them to good use.[/QUOTE] Cool thanks, I just got back from that thread too. I should have made the plaza more occupied instead of just the "curfew" that I don't even know exsists lol
this is a comic about lens flares
Your ''idea'' has been done before. And better.
[quote=goldengnome;16488726]this is a comic about lens flares[/quote] gtfo
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