I'n my opinion, it's too blur and u should add more deatial.
Nice job
[QUOTE=Dinnyforst;26479326]In my opinion it's too blurry, and you should add more detail.
Nice job.[/QUOTE]
Fixed.
The most-front soldier has awkwardly posed legs; his shin is broken and his back leg seems to rigid to for a dead man (at least, I assume he is dead). The back guy's shin looks broke as well. Other than that I like the pose.
Oh I'm sorry I type too fast :[
Less blur next time, otherwise, nice.
posing, even as simple as it is, needs a lot of work. when you use sdof, remember to focus on something.
[QUOTE=Phsykotik;26479424]Fixed.[/QUOTE]
Actually I am a grammar Nazi and your fix is not strictly correct.
If their barricaded in then how did the die?
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;26482002]Actually I am a grammar Nazi and your fix is not strictly correct.[/QUOTE]
I do not really care about the second addition. Really all I was looking for was the first sentence.
[editline]I AM A TERRROROTIST![/editline]
[QUOTE=TheGoodDoctorF;26482796]If their barricaded in then how did the die?[/QUOTE]
They could have bled out from being injured before they turtled-up.
I'm going to be the only honest person in this thread and say it doesn't look nice on any level. The blur is awful, the posing is bad, the angle is boring and the picture is fisheyed to all fuck. The lighting is drab and even the theme of the image (or subject I guess, whatever) isn't really interesting, nor does it make much sense. It's pretty much irredeemably bad.
Try and think of something a bit more interesting next time, and don't even try editing or DoF blur until you can pose properly.
[editline]5th December 2010[/editline]
okay, only honest person except Zerax and Chesty
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