• IAN PAISLEYS ADVENTURES 1: A horribly made comic, "5/5" - IGN
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Please allow a minute for the pictures to load and post some criticism at the end. It was a normal day in CS_office. Our hero Ian Paisley was quietly reading a newspaper with the radio in the background. [URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Page_117.jpg[/IMG][/URL] The radio flickers on and off, and switches frequency to a different channel. [URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Page_29.jpg[/IMG][/URL] An unkown person places his hand on our heros shoulder, he turns around. There is suddenly a chill in the room and it is eerily quiet. Ian puts his hand under his desk and reaches for his highly customised Desert Eagle. [URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Page_36.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Page_44.jpg[/IMG][/URL] Our hero runs to the next room, just escaping the unknown individual. [URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Page_51.jpg[/IMG][/URL] Ian and his team has set up a trap, Stanley presses the button and springs the trap. The unknown figure now known as Dr Hax runs into the barrels followed by an explosion. [URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Page_61.jpg[/IMG][/URL] Our hero and his bitches have won the day. [URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Page_71.jpg[/IMG][/URL] OR HAVE THEY?!1/?
Dr Hax is totally not overused.
not bad man
Some of the writing was okay.
thank you guys i am plotting the making of the next episode in our heros adventures
Or and im just spitballing here Dont
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