I've found some stuff to get me a little bit started. Granted I still need practice.
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Why don't we focus the camera?
You want to turn on noclip, back away from the scene, and zoom in using right click and moving your mouse forward while having the camera tool out.
It will bring your scene into focus and prevent a fish eyed effect.
The characters should have been in the center of your scene, because they are on the edges of the image, this would be fixed by doing the above.
[QUOTE=Lebowski;26758953]You want to turn on noclip, back away from the scene, and zoom in using right click and moving your mouse forward while having the camera tool out.
It will bring your scene into focus and prevent a fish eyed effect.
The characters should have been in the center of your scene, because they are on the edges of the image, this would be fixed by doing the above.[/QUOTE]
Thank you.
[QUOTE=lolz3;26759130]Thank you.[/QUOTE]
Hmmm one of the first new comers that actually take criticism.
I like you. :buddy:
Dont use bloom
It would be good scene, just improve angle and lighting.
Keep it up!
Just add more details,and use camera's zoom.
I don't like the angle and composition. The characters are on the edges of the picture, and it becomes hard to focus on them, while the center of the image catches my eye immediately, but there's nothing there but scenery. I assume the focus was meant to be on the people. My mind is telling me to look at them but it ends up giving me a headache because the image just isn't arranged that way.
But it's good that you're listening to us when we try to help you. Most newcomers aren't as... mature (lack of a better word.)
A little work on the posing would have helped. Some more gestures from the guy with the gun would have made a big difference.
Apart from that, keep it up and listen to what everyone else here says.
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