• No Gmod for a Day...
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a little Comics i Made yesterday.... [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Page_129.jpg[/img_thumb] [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Page_218.jpg[/img_thumb] [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Page_314.jpg[/img_thumb] [img_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Page_48.jpg[/img_thumb] Futures: Me(LoL) Raptorfromsweden my Bad grammar( thanks to google translate) Fussy (only name)
I like it, and the layout of the pages is nice. Better than what I could do.
I would like to hire you as a writer for my new magazine.
[QUOTE=Zeraxify;26827278]I would like to hire you as a writer for my new magazine.[/QUOTE] :razz:
[QUOTE=Zeraxify;26827278]I would like to hire you as a writer for my new magazine.[/QUOTE] Ok (LoL)
Nice layout. But work on punch lines and witty remarks. On a second note. Garry did not break GMod. The Source engine update did.
....little Problem...i forgot what is it Punch lines...
[QUOTE=redman23;26831054]....little Problem...i forgot what is it Punch lines...[/QUOTE] A punchline can be an ironic twist, a witty observation or a jarring belly laugh. Not all jokes have a punchline in a classic sense. Some comedic sketches simply end abruptly, or fade to black without a conclusion.
oh ok thanks
To be honest while I usually don't bark at bad English, the large numbers of errors actually do stand out this time. Also I recommend you save your images as targas in gmod before editing them.
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