Doesn't take very long to do this. And it's my 1st comic as well.
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Heh, Foley has an answer for EVERYTHING.
Not bad for a first comic in all honesty. I was expecting something quite mediocre and poorly done as most FIRST comics are. You're off to a good start with most basics down pat. Now you just need to expand on it some more.
Good stuff.
I'll agree with Jim.
Biggest issue I see right now is the speech bubbles don't need to take up a third of the frame.
Look around at some of the better comics around (such as Jim's). Notice how small the bubbles and text are, and how unobtrusive they are.
On that note, your layout is also pretty uninspiring, but that's something you learn over time, really. That's a creative style, and you can't really learn those except through practice.
All in all, pretty good, though. Surpassed my expectations for a first comic, definitely. :golfclap:
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always put that in the console so the images aren't so low-res.
Very nice for a first comic.
[QUOTE=Gmod4ever;26759715]I'll agree with Jim.
Biggest issue I see right now is the speech bubbles don't need to take up a third of the frame.
Look around at some of the better comics around (such as Jim's). Notice how small the bubbles and text are, and how unobtrusive they are.
On that note, your layout is also pretty uninspiring, but that's something you learn over time, really. That's a creative style, and you can't really learn those except through practice.
All in all, pretty good, though. Surpassed my expectations for a first comic, definitely. :golfclap:[/QUOTE]
Well thank you kind sir. :buddy:
At one point, I thought that he thrust his crotch forward because of the angle, though I have to say the comic itself is very well done for a first.
Kerplunk is my new favorite word.
Nice comic man. Really good for a first one, better than my first one at least haha
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