[b]FACEPUNCH[/b]
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The black stuff on the mask is my feeble attempt at editing. Are the legs still too stiff?
Posing is alright, you are getting better. The legs are oddly posed though, and that girl in the background was a bad idea, to begin with she is badly posed, and to be realistic if he just threw the punch at the second she wouldn't be cheering already. She probably just be shocked. Also IMO for melee fights like this the camera should be closer to focus on them.
If he is still contacting the combines face from the punch, I think it might look cool if his head was a bit turned from the force of the punch, I don't know, I can't pose for shit, this is way better than any of mine
[QUOTE=Take yo;20641478]Posing is alright, you are getting better. The legs are oddly posed though, and that girl in the background was a bad idea, to begin with she is badly posed, and to be realistic if he just threw the punch at the second she wouldn't be cheering already. She probably just be shocked. Also IMO for melee fights like this the camera should be closer to focus on them.[/QUOTE]
The girls not cheering, she's flipping out. I posed the legs as if hes leaning into the punch, and yeah, I probably should've given them more focus.
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[QUOTE=slippp22;20641779]If he is still contacting the combines face from the punch, I think it might look cool if his head was a bit turned from the force of the punch, I don't know, I can't pose for shit, this is way better than any of mine[/QUOTE]
The punch is [b]just[/b] hitting.
whats the black stuff suppose to be, ashes?
if it is, looks good i guess
also posing looks stiff and combine needs more motion blur
stiff as always, and there is absolutely no visible force in that punch
[b]Sissy punch[/b]
As usual, your posing is as stiff as ever.
The guy punching has no expression at all, he just looks bored punching combine as if he did it everyday.
Look at several pictures of people fighting, maybe that'll help you out.
[QUOTE=gtanoofa;20642871]i haven't seen anyone punching someone like this, but whatever[/QUOTE]
Remember back to your middle school days when everyone threw pussy punches, now look at the picture, look familiar?
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[QUOTE=H3llfire741;20643196]whats the black stuff suppose to be, ashes?
if it is, looks good i guess
also posing looks stiff and combine needs more motion blur[/QUOTE]
Supposed to be some slight cracking.
[editline]01:49PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=KaNe1310;20645612]stiff as always, and there is absolutely no visible force in that punch[/QUOTE]
No visible force because he's a righty doing a left hit right hook swing
God bless excuses :dance:
It doesnt really look like a punch(no offense its hard to get it look good). Also the citicens face is too calm for a fight.
reminds me of ROCK'EM SOCK'EM
[img]http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_rlhZCdZl2is/SRlQbrQ3N0I/AAAAAAAAG8I/3TJ1iyqOQ0U/s400/6091.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=DEMONSKUL;20655977]reminds me of ROCK'EM SOCK'EM
[img]http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_rlhZCdZl2is/SRlQbrQ3N0I/AAAAAAAAG8I/3TJ1iyqOQ0U/s400/6091.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
/nostalgia
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I STILL GOT ONE OF THESE
caps
[QUOTE=DEMONSKUL;20655977]reminds me of ROCK'EM SOCK'EM
[IMG]http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_rlhZCdZl2is/SRlQbrQ3N0I/AAAAAAAAG8I/3TJ1iyqOQ0U/s400/6091.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE]
GOD DAMMIT NINJA'D!
You're getting better man.
Also if you are gonna edit in cracking, I suggest a sharper brush.
[QUOTE=Sottalytober;20646162]
Supposed to be some slight cracking.
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it should be more sharper, don't use big soft brushes
and darker would be nice
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