• Adventures with the enclave
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[img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/5889/horrigan.jpg[/img] My first nontf2 comic Direct link [url]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/5889/horrigan.jpg[/url]
I didn't really get why the guy next to him's head was bleeding so profusely. Your editing could use some work as well. There should still be some tutorials around the forums if you're interested...
I didn't find it funny.
you said it wasn't going to suck you lied
Please explain.
What the fuck is this. I'm sorry, i'm seriously confused, i understand that its about frank horrigan from fallout, but why? Why is he there? Why is he with someone with a really fucked up bleeding face? [i]Why?[/i] Please work on your editing, story and posing.
Okay so, he's bigging it up like he's saved the two enclave guys when in actuallity they're wrecked because he was with them punching deathclaw and dosent afraid fo anything
this isn't funny and the plot is not coherent.
Stop using GIMP man, get Photoshop. You'll get much better results in your editing.
What? No idea what you were going for there sorry. Work on the story. Remember if your making a funny comic it, it must be funny on the first read a second read of it because someone doesn't get it ruins it! In this case no idea what was going on so didn't find it funny.
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