Catch Your Breath

[Infab]

[video=youtube;_4A6a3ovd5E]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_4A6a3ovd5E[/video]

[IMG]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/51118976/Catch-Your-Breath-Edit.jpg[/IMG]

[QUOTE][IMG]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/238/4/f/catch_your_breath_by_infallible_wolf-d5cgasb.jpg[/IMG]

[I]The original unedited version.[/I]
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My second scene build ever.

CC and such would be appreciated.

[Ninja Nub[NOR]]

the contrast is way too strong, and it sort of looks like she's squatting down to take a shit

[KingGrim]

[QUOTE='Ninja Nub[NOR];37400294']the contrast is way too strong, and it sort of looks like she's squatting down to take a shit[/QUOTE]

Not to mention the scene looks overly crowded.

[Infab]

[QUOTE][IMG]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/51118976/gm_scenebuild0000.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE]

Unedited version.

[the tee]

[QUOTE=Infab;37400500]Unedited version.[/QUOTE]
This looks much better.

[aNoire]

What model is that?