I am completely aware of the area that could have easily been filled with more people or maybe some props, I apologize for that. This was mainly an editing test. I know the posing is not perfect as well. Feel free to criticize on anything you believe could be improved. I am always looking to improve my screenshots. I also didn't feel like using combine for this pose, I didn't feel that they fit the feel of the map, just for you guys wondering that.
[IMG]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/18273999/Screenshot%20Edits/Spotting%20Patrol.jpg[/IMG]
Original image can be found [URL="https://dl.dropbox.com/u/18273999/Screenshot%20Edits/Spotting%20Patrol%20Before.jpg"]here[/URL]:
Way too much empty space on the right.
The texturing on the citizen's shirt looks really nice, though, but the texturing on the wall repeats a bit.
[QUOTE=FloaterTWO;27320110]Way too much empty space on the right.
The texturing on the citizen's shirt looks really nice, though, but the texturing on the wall repeats a bit.[/QUOTE]
Yea, I said that in the right above the pic, I wasn't actually expecting to put this up on FP, so I wasn't actually thinking when I was posing/making the scene, but then I got into editing and took a lot of time on it, thank you though for the criticism.
Looks great.
Thanks a lot man.
What's up with the random lambda symbol? You should have used the rule of 3 by not puting the main subject right in the middle. Actually what I see first is that Thompson... Otherwise, the picture and the texturing are not that bad. But you should work on posing and composition first. ;)
Looks amazing, great picture quality.
[QUOTE=pMnky;27357783]What's up with the random lambda symbol? You should have used the rule of 3 by not puting the main subject right in the middle. Actually what I see first is that Thompson... Otherwise, the picture and the texturing are not that bad. But you should work on posing and composition first. ;)[/QUOTE] I completely agree, I just thought the lambda was a nice touch, but I see what you're saying, thank you. The reason the posing and such isn't very good is becuase when I was making this, I wasn't thinking about posting it on Facepunch, but then I took it into photoshop and started spending a lot of time editing it, and I wanted to see what people thought. Thanks for the criticism.
[QUOTE=Unmentioned;27357811]Looks amazing, great picture quality.[/QUOTE]
Why thank you sir.
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