Razor Train #216 Carrying High-Priority Cargo At Station

[Deathbucket]

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[b]*SKREEEE!* The tracks wailed as the Razor Train squealed into the station, The pods rattled and shook. One was illuminated by a red light next to it, which signalled "HIGH PRIORITY", the heavy arms keeping the pod tight shut like a coffin were there to prevent the interior prisoner escaping
"Hey mike, what do you think's in these pods, high priority after all."
"I dunno, but guessing by these arms it's very VERY dangerous, watch yourself"
*SKREEEH, TRRHHCHoOOWOWWW!* The metal squealed as the pod began to warp and dent.
"SHIT! IT'S OPENING! EVACUATE! EVACUATE!"
The men scurried away as the pod smashed open, the angry, shrouded by the darkness, prisoner from inside, tore the other pod off the rail and carried it away. This [url=http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=800518]Angered the UU beyond belief, making them order a red alert, sending out the strongest mutant they had available[/url][/b]

[editline]03:41PM[/editline]

OFC: This is issue two of my alternate reality HL2 Thingy

[ChestyMcGee]

It's a wee bit dark.

[Deathbucket]

Thanks for the advice

[AJester]

Seems fine to me. I'd say add a glow or something to it in paint.net though. Just for an extra bit of UMPH.

[The_J_Hat]

It's...okay.