Jack Hunter In: Who's Hunting Whom?

[-Ben_Wolfe-]

So finally this comic is done, and before school starts too. :V

As some people may know, Jack Hunter was a comic idea that was originally for some Badassery contest about a year ago. Since I obviously missed that I decided to do the comic out of pure enjoyment (though it's sometime a pain in the ass). And due to the fact that my gmod is messed up for the time being, I had some time and less distractions to finish this comic. During the editing I felt disappointed about the comic, but when I began doing the dialogue I had renewed faith in it. So I hope you like it, and if you don't that's okay just let me know.

Now the premise of the comic is simple; an over the top action thriller with a badass hero spewing one-liners here and there. Unintentionally I seem to be edging for this to be a series, so I hope things go well.

and since I don't know how to make a picture into a link, link to comic:
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[ZeekyPoe]

Finger posing was off in a couple panels but otherwise I loved it.

[-Ben_Wolfe-]

Yeah, not exactly sure why I never fixed that.

[binkow]

Badass

[Phanny]

i liked it ben :) gj

[editline]09:07PM[/editline]

like you said couple grammar errors nothin major tbh

[Chi]

Awesome comic, as such, lemmie show you how to link pictures as images.

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Hope you like it :D

[Foos]

Cool. I like it alot.

[-Ben_Wolfe-]

[QUOTE=Chihuahua;16912314]Awesome comic, as such, lemmie show you how to link pictures as images.

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Hope you like it :D[/QUOTE]

Thanks, I'll have to keep that in mind for future reference.

Thanks everyone else. Glad you liked it.

[RobSaintanan]

Not bad as said there were some grammatical issues and the finger poser was odd at times, but other than that it was well executed with some rather comical moments. Good job. :cheers:

[Striker89]

I have a feeling there'll be a rambo scene verrrry soon.

[-Ben_Wolfe-]

[QUOTE=Striker89;16913615]I have a feeling there'll be a rambo scene verrrry soon.[/QUOTE]

:smug: Don't give me any ideas.

:P

[MADmarine]

He's back and more badass than ever, I love it.

[simkas]

That was awesome.
And using my personal skin as the main bad guy made it even more awesome.

[-Ben_Wolfe-]

[QUOTE=simkas;16918742]That was awesome.
And using my personal skin as the main bad guy made it even more awesome.[/QUOTE]

I chose him because he was pretty much the exact opposite of Jack (Jack's black suit your skin's grey suit, etc). :v:

Thanks everyone. I'm glad you liked it!

[Jim_Riley]

I will expect the sequel. Soon.

[Uberslug]

jimmayyy when can I expect posses

[ChestyMcGee]

Is it supposed to be funny?

[The_J_Hat]

I don't think so. Maybe some of the phrases Jack says like "What a blast." Nice comic.

[ChestyMcGee]

Oh... I just assumed because some of the lines and parts of the story are so very cheesy and the whole thing with the cat just seems like a joke to me.

[Mosquito]

Awesome job, really! :D

[-Ben_Wolfe-]

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;16981803]Oh... I just assumed because some of the lines and parts of the story are so very cheesy and the whole thing with the cat just seems like a joke to me.[/QUOTE]

It's really satire of the cliche action hero with a few twists here and there to maintain originality. The puns for instance are supposed to be comical in the sense that he makes jokes out of things that clearly aren't a laughing matter sometimes, much like the original Batman. The cat was used mainly because at the time of it's creation the contest, that I spoke of earlier, required specific lines; In this case "That's nice, but I'm more of a cat person" So I decided 'Why not make the cat both Jack's sidekick and a weapon' plus I'm so much of a nut that a flailing cat is humerous to me. In the end though it will have pseuado-serious aspects.

[FrostyZippo]

Oh the cheese!
Epic stuff, though some placement of text in some of the speech bubbles was a bit off.

[Renamon]

I was about to bitch at you for making an overused action hero that can destroy mountains of people, but then I realized it was a joke. :V

Yay for throwing cats.