This comic is hopefully more fresh than the previous one.
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/comic2.bmp[/img]
I looked into my previous constructive criticisms and improved.
You did not improve in the slightest.
Some suggestions from me:
1 - Don't try to be funny.
2 - Turn up the graphics settings.
3 - Don't use mspaint.
4. Don't use the word "mate."
Wow dude stop trolling
[QUOTE=Kung Fu Jew;17086127]4. Don't use the word "mate."[/QUOTE]
"mate" is commonly used as "friend" in various parts of the world.
I didn't laugh, but the comcic lines itself were pretty well done.
However, as mentioned turn up the graphic settings.
i thought this comic was a heartwarming tale of racial equality and medical advancement.
[QUOTE=green-ops;17087253]"mate" is commonly used as "friend" in various parts of the world.[/QUOTE]
No. I'm not allowed to say "nigga" just because I'm white so anyone who isn't an aussie or a brit should not be able to say mate.
Of your two recent comics, there isn't much of a point to them. It's like they are half done cause there isn't a punchline or anything really humorous. They just seem to be there in the comic for the sake of being there. Not really funny at all.
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