I was very hesitant about putting this up, it was a birthday card for my friend. So you might see how it would work better as a birthday card rather than a comic. Anyway i decided to put it up.
[img]http://fc09.deviantart.com/fs46/f/2009/216/9/9/Birthdays_suck_by_Johnt447.jpg[/img]
For more stuff that is WAY better look here for the rest of my comics!
[url]http://johnt447.deviantart.com/[/url]
The uneven frames look weird, the tilting makes me nauseous, the spelling errors annoyed me, the pointing in the last frame looks ridiculous, and all but the engineer seem to have no personality thanks to the half-assed posing.
Did I miss anything other than the shitty balloons in the background?
i liked it, amused my for a few seaconds so its ok in my veiw
[QUOTE=Kushie;16498967]The uneven frames look weird, the tilting makes me nauseous, the spelling errors annoyed me, the pointing in the last frame looks ridiculous, and all but the engineer seem to have no personality thanks to the half-assed posing.
Did I miss anything other than the shitty balloons in the background?[/QUOTE]
I see no spelling errors.
Nauseous?
I think the posing is fine although that's my opinion.
yes speech bubbles i agree with you, i have done alot of work to improve apon them since i made this.
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Although if you were referring to the posts spelling rather than the comic then yeah i made a mistake and i fixed it :D
Its very nice!
:frown:
^ avatar fits nicely
poor engi
The avatar does fit nicely lol.
Yuppers poor engi.....
lol
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