German squad clearing roadblock. - Garry's Mod

Hey there, 2nd pose today. Here's the dealio VVV German squad under command of Colonel Tofen has been issued orders to go throughout the city and clear all roadblocks and debris so the main assualt force can move through the city without the hassle of those damn Yanks. They stopped here on a road in Caen to clear a roadblock where one of the divisions Tiger I tanks got caught up on an ambush and were forced to abandon their tank. They split up in 2 small squads of 4 men. 1st squad had the captain with a semi-automatic rifleman, bolt-action rifleman, sub-machine gunner. 2nd squad consisted of a machine-gunner, a sniper, assualt rifleman, rocket soldier. [img]http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/2281/doddonner0000.jpg[/img]

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Jealous because you spawn 20 ragdolls and sprayed blood and I took 30 minutes to take my take and adore my work?

Actually it's ok. I can't live with myself calling someones work crap. I'm sorry. It is a bit too blurry. The officer is too chilled out for a German officer. Other than that, it's good.

Mmhmm, my job here is done... for now.

It needs a better camera angle.

I don't understand at all. One guy's sitting down and he looks ridiculous, another guy's clinging onto a tank trap (I think another one is too), and the fourth is digging next to them. Also, four men isn't a squad, it's a fireteam.

- Too blurry; hurts my eyes. - The guy on the far left looks like he's trying to balance on one leg. - Posing needs work.

[QUOTE=Dheepan;17098536]Jealous because you spawn 20 ragdolls and sprayed blood and I took 30 minutes to take my take and adore my work?[/QUOTE] That made [B]no[/B] sense. Also, picture is pretty poor. Blury, Badly posed, boring angle.

[QUOTE=Kung Fu Jew;17099340]I don't understand at all. One guy's sitting down and he looks ridiculous, another guy's clinging onto a tank trap (I think another one is too), and the fourth is digging next to them. Also, four men isn't a squad, it's a fireteam.[/QUOTE] it;s called tipping over to roll the tank trap away, and his putting the tool under to help lift and move.

Picture is blurry as fuck and you need engineers with explosives to clear hedgehogs... not a couple of guys with pickaxes.

Oh i'm sorry, what I suppose to go waste my time and download engineer models?

To get nice looking blur, try doing it outside of garrysmod in an editor.

[QUOTE=Dheepan;17107572]Oh i'm sorry, what I suppose to go waste my time and download engineer models?[/QUOTE] could have at least gave some effort and spawned a dynamite and had it wired up or something. there is very little effort put into this - as many have said, the posing is unnatural and looks uncomfortable. The picture also has a detractive look to it. You also need work on taking criticism, all of this was constructive yet you chose to take the low road and complain about your own faults.

Did Bloo give you these models?

You're getting better! She isn't a tester... We had an agreement, and she will be updated like every other tester except she isn't obligated to test anything, the models are hers now. She already agreed that she won't share, so don't ask. So, the models are hers and she does, mostly, what ever she wants with them.

A few problems: Posing is very good except for that one on the ground The camera angle is bad (fisheye plus, it's uninteresting) Way too much SDoF, I can hardly make out some of the characters. You can't move a tank trap with your bare hands.

[QUOTE=Uberslug;17115028]A few problems: Posing is very good except for that one on the ground The camera angle is bad (fisheye plus, it's uninteresting) Way too much SDoF, I can hardly make out some of the characters. You can't move a tank trap with your bare hands.[/QUOTE] Your my idol Uber <3. I'll try the next one with some more help, i'm not good with photoshop but I shall play around with stuff.

Practice makes perfect. Plus, you should probably go easy on the Photoshop at first. Play around a lot, but don't necessarily post it unless you really think you came across a good technique. Then find out what others think.

[QUOTE=Uberslug;17115083]Practice makes perfect. Plus, you should probably go easy on the Photoshop at first. Play around a lot, but don't necessarily post it unless you really think you came across a good technique. Then find out what others think.[/QUOTE] Very true, I could post it in the edit my screenshots aswell if I can't do it. :3

nice much better than your last one i take back what i said. have a pallet.

The guy in the foreground pulling (?) on the tank trap looks like he's about to fall over - he has no ground bearings according to his foot placement and leg position. The other one looks like he's trying to pull it over, which, as Uber said, would be a bad idea (he'll probably throw out his back and he should know better). The guy digging with the shovel has it pointing in the opposite direction from the tank trap, he won't be doing much good digging up the ground he's standing over. The guy sitting down just looks ridiculous and shouldn't have been added to the picture - unless you could've had him standing up or doing something useful, he makes the entire left half of the picture look like junk.

Noone has seen Gman.. hehe

[QUOTE=Dheepan;17118499]Noone has seen Gman.. hehe[/QUOTE] in the door :dance:

[QUOTE=the-dutch-guy;17118556]in the door :dance:[/QUOTE] fffff

[QUOTE=Dheepan;17115055]Your my idol Uber <3.[/QUOTE] Oh right so when Uber tells you what I told you it's all "I love you let me touch your clothes!" and when I tell you it's "I'm not going to waste my time improving my picture."

Good idea.

[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;17120887]Oh right so when Uber tells you what I told you it's all "I love you let me touch your clothes!" and when I tell you it's "I'm not going to waste my time improving my picture."[/QUOTE] Well it's because Uber is like the best poser here.. well atleast I think that, and I know what hes talking about, I haven't seen your poses very much or I haven't clicked on them.

[QUOTE=Dheepan;17123503]Well it's because Uber is like the best poser here.. well atleast I think that, and I know what hes talking about, I haven't seen your poses very much or I haven't clicked on them.[/QUOTE] [b]Poser[/b] or [b]editer[/b]?

I think both.