Part 1: I know it's a bit bad but I was in a rush. Part 2 will be better.
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So it begins!
Bwoh?....DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
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Those rabbids look perfect on TF2 maps...just sayin...
Dialog reads left to right, top to bottom. It was a bit confusing because you didn't follow that template. I would also suggest different speech bubbles, these look a bit sloppy. One last thing, that red font is nearly illegible.
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