"Stay down!" A zombie themed, mildly photoshopped screenshot for Halloween. - Garry's Mod

[i][b]Happy Halloween, hehehehehehehehehehe![/b][/i] [img]http://i.imgur.com/e9shu.jpg[/img] C&C please, I experimented with blood and that kind of stuff. I want to know how much I sucked and how I'm on the same level as other crap posers like thesniipertf2 (not really, I know I'm not anywhere near that bad). :v: And yes, that zombie on the left [i]is[/i] supposed to be barfing up blood. EDIT: Added some of the easier (photoshopped) fixes.

A tad too dark.

[QUOTE=Blitzkrieg Zero;37991938]A tad too dark.[/QUOTE] That was probably when I dorked around with brightness and contrast. I'll fiddle with it some more later when I have time.

Depth of field should've focused a bit more on guy in front. As stated it is too dark, and the blood puke should have been darkened up to match. And I'm guessing the zed by the chick was shot there, otherwise there would be a blood trail from him sliding down the counter. Posing's good, though. Keep it up.

[QUOTE=AFewOstriches;37992518]Depth of field should've focused a bit more on guy in front. As stated it is too dark, and the blood puke should have been darkened up to match. And I'm guessing the zed by the chick was shot there, otherwise there would be a blood trail from him sliding down the counter. Posing's good, though. Keep it up.[/QUOTE] Actually, I was wanting it more focused on the woman. Even with the Depth of Field, it's obvious what the dude's doing. With the DOF, the woman was less visible, and I wanted y'all to be able to see what was going on there, mainly with her faceposing and fingerposing (both of which I was really proud of for some reason). [editline]12th October 2012[/editline] I went ahead and swapped out the original with an easier to see version, with some better blood.

Now that's much better.

[QUOTE=Kartoffel;38004737]Actually, I was wanting it more focused on the woman. Even with the Depth of Field, it's obvious what the dude's doing. With the DOF, the woman was less visible, and I wanted y'all to be able to see what was going on there, mainly with her faceposing and fingerposing (both of which I was really proud of for some reason). [editline]12th October 2012[/editline] I went ahead and swapped out the original with an easier to see version, with some better blood.[/QUOTE] If you want us to be able to see anything, particularly the nuances of a character, you need to light the scene accordingly. The blurry fucker on the left or the dead guy off center right are brighter so those are what get most of the attention, at a glance you'd hardly notice the woman was there, which is compounded by the fact that the brighter figure (the guy) is out of focus so it just worsens the overall impression of the image. As well, the blood is not looking too hot, it's really just a red smudge at this point. Look into using actual sample blood and etc. Probably should be more of a drip than splat but right now the blood as zero definition. Posing is alright but I think the zombies having their arms so far out to the side is a little ridiculous, but generally not bad.

Angles pretty weird.

It's good