Yes, the title sucks balls.
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I will edit it later. But I would like Constructive Criticism for now.
He ain't that skeaky.
That soldier is deaf and blind.
Maybe the soldier is listening to music with his iPod earphones.
Not that great, the posing needs work, the camera angle, and the overall presentation. You said he's "sneaky" yet he appears to have killed at least one enemy.
Yeah, Sneaky was wrong. I was too lazy to think of a good title.
And Cakemaster, what about the posing is awful? Not doubting the posing is awful, but just want to know what i need to focus on more than other areas.
[QUOTE=Manneh;27764554]Yeah, Sneaky was wrong. I was too lazy to think of a good title.
And Cakemaster, what about the posing is awful? Not doubting the posing is awful, but just want to know what i need to focus on more than other areas.[/QUOTE]
The posing is awful for the Soldier mostly, who appears to be somewhat stiff and it doesn't look natural. The Sniper is much better though, and I gotta compliment that.
So basically, the Sniper looks pretty good but you need to make sure characters other than the main subject are posed so they look natural, not all stiff.
If I would be that Soldier, wall will be the last place where I would be looking for Sniper
Don't edit it, nail your composition first.
Seriously people, editing should be the [I]last[/I] thing you try.
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