[b]Intro[/b]
This truck has been built with a minimum use of Wiremod.
:siren: [b]Screenshots[/b] :siren:
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/gm_flatgrass20080018.jpg[/img]
[b]Firing the Rocket truck.[/b]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/gm_flatgrass20080022.jpg[/img]
[b]An awesome side shot[/b]
[b] Facts [/b]
-This contraption is only [b]45[/b] props!
-Each rocket rail can hold 5 rockets
-Each rocket will explode on contact
[b]BUGS[/b]
-Sometimes rockets randomly explode
-If you physgun it too fast it black holes
-Sometimes the wheels lock up
[b] Comments and Criticism are welcome [/b]
Interesting concept, but it is not very good, try to use less phx and more vanilla props
[QUOTE=hippieman58;17345325]Interesting concept, but it is not very good, try to use less phx and more vanilla props[/QUOTE]
Its still V1 (the first working version) I will gussy it up when I get all the bugs fixed.
Well thats good to hear, but in my opinion you should have waited to post it till then.
[QUOTE=hippieman58;17345387]Well thats good to hear, but in my opinion you should have waited to post it until then.[/QUOTE]
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Fixed up your grammar
[editline]05:10PM[/editline]
It's also V1 and a lot of people post there V1 and work up from there.
Minimal use of PHX? The only things that arent PHX are the launchers themselves.
[QUOTE=Timebomb757;17346155]Minimal use of PHX? The only things that arent PHX are the launchers themselves.[/QUOTE]
Find me gridded vanilla props.
um, just improvise like most other people?
[QUOTE=Kyle902;17346216]Find me gridded vanilla props.[/QUOTE]
Ive seen plently of FAR better looking MLRS' made using all vanilla props. Why on earth do you need grids?
Or why dont you get smartsnap so ALL props get a grid?
[QUOTE=Timebomb757;17346887]Ive seen plently of FAR better looking MLRS' made using all vanilla props. Why on earth do you need grids?
Or why dont you get smartsnap so ALL props get a grid?[/QUOTE]
Fine I'll remove that part of the OP
Wow, this is fucking terrible.
No where near amazing.
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Sorry, but this is bad. Just a phx nubtruck with some griders slapped on the back, propably firing propane tanks with thrusters.
Try to make something look like the real thing, use a reference pic. PHX is fine, as long as you use it well, and not in the lazy way you just did.
hmmm, i will make it guided missiles rather
[QUOTE=BBOOBBYY!;17349078]Sorry, but this is bad. Just a phx nubtruck with some griders slapped on the back, propably firing propane tanks with thrusters.
Try to make something look like the real thing, use a reference pic. PHX is fine, as long as you use it well, and not in the lazy way you just did.[/QUOTE]
Meh I'll completely overhaul it.
[QUOTE=Kyle902;17349285]Meh I'll completely overhaul it.[/QUOTE]
Bwuahahahahaha.....haha... i'm sorry that just made me fuckin' laugh my ass off. haha.
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Wait... FFFF Benji.... I didn't say anything above :ninja:
These kinds of threads always tend to end with the OP saying they will just redo it, don't they?
Nope, usually OP doesn't even reply to them, or will just flame on people because of not being to take any kind of critism :V
[QUOTE=hippieman58;17345325]Interesting concept, but it is not very good, try to use less phx and more vanilla props[/QUOTE]
What concept? There is absolutely nothing appealing about this truck, and it has way to many props for what it is, 45 props would yield something much better looking. And if it blackholes the way that he said it does, it must lag pretty bad too.
[QUOTE=Kyle902;17345248][b]Intro[/b]
This truck has been built with a minimum use of Wiremod.
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Just so you know, this is usually a bad thing.
[QUOTE=Kyle902;17346216]Find me gridded vanilla props.[/QUOTE]
I'll show you a griding addon:
[url=http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=35405][img]http://www.garrysmod.org/img/?t=dll&id=35405[/img][/url]
[QUOTE=Killer_Andre;17363815]I'll show you a griding addon:
[url=http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=35405][img]http://www.garrysmod.org/img/?t=dll&id=35405[/img][/url][/QUOTE]
I already have Smartsnap.
This is my first version and I will completely redo it.
In the meantime thank you all for the advice and I won't screw up with the next version.
[QUOTE=Kyle902;17364589]I already have Smartsnap.
This is my first version and I will completely redo it.
In the meantime thank you all for the advice and I won't screw up with the next version.[/QUOTE]
Ugh Huh :ninja:
[QUOTE=Kyle902;17345417]:eng101:
[editline]05:10PM[/editline]
Fixed up your grammar
[editline]05:10PM[/editline]
It's also V1 and a lot of people post there V1 and work up from there.[/QUOTE]
you get good advice and you correct his grammar
imo not a good first impression here on the contraptions forum
a few pointers that I didn't see in the thread, don't use "amazing". ever.
some of your facts are either unimportant or should have been a given. I've never heard of a rocket that doesn't explode on impact unless if it was designed not to.
don't bother posting bugs unless if you plan on releasing it, or if it's a funny bug
don't use "V1". use "V2" if you make it again (and significantly better), but "V1" is a weak excuse for poor quality
if you want to "join" the contraptions forum, lurk a bit before you post. look at threads where peoples stuff gets criticized, and look at threads where peoples stuff gets praised. it's even better if you can find something in the middle
So "If there is "cool" "awesome" "best" "amazing" in your title, your contraption must be (very) bad" is true.
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