I'd like some feedback please, like what can i do to make it better, what's good and bad about it please.
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FD3_nF3LKT8[/url]
Try to turn off the death notices
Oh also use source recorder to make a demo and then render it so you don't get slowdowns (FPS drops) when you are recording an video
What's the command for turning off the death notices?
I've never heard of the source recorder before, i always use fraps.
source recorder works with a console command.
its 'record (demo name)' i think.
Thats not decent, its..
Bad
Next time try to turn of the red screen at death and the HUD
Not bad! Not bad at all!
I found it funny, so your a step in the right direction!
[QUOTE=Sealy12103;20992083]Thats not decent, its..
Bad
Next time try to turn of the red screen at death and the HUD[/QUOTE]
In comparison to any other gmod video about that song it is decent.
anyway im not gonna bitch just cause you don't like it, still you tell me to turn these things off but don't give me the commands, i can't turn it off and there's no point making a new thread if i can find out here.
i know how to disable the hud with cl_drawhud 0
how do i remove death notices the red death screen and the flat line sound?
Adding as I watch
get rid of fuckfaced gman
flailing ragdolls are not funny
[IMG]http://i831.photobucket.com/albums/zz240/Yabyub/jj-1.jpg[/IMG]
this
that was a hideous attempt at lip synching.
the scenes that you attempt to match up with the music have almost no flow.
english people saying fucking are funny.
good variation of environments
do not change the music for the credits, use the same song you're applying music to. Put the credits OVER the rest of the video
3/10, and I'm being generous.
[QUOTE=Skidmarks;21001673][B]In comparison to any other gmod video about that song it is decent.
[/B]
anyway im not gonna bitch just cause you don't like it, still you tell me to turn these things off but don't give me the commands, i can't turn it off and there's no point making a new thread if i can find out here.
i know how to disable the hud with cl_drawhud 0
how do i remove death notices the red death screen and the flat line sound?[/QUOTE]
Shit is still shit no matter how much less shitty it smells. How about you use some grammar and spelling, and make videos with better effects, faceposer and not using flailing ragdolls through the entire thing and better editing/writing, if the song wasn't saying exactly what was happening, I wouldn't have any clue what was going on.
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Oh and GMan with a stupid face is hopelessly old.
[QUOTE=Skidmarks;20974773]I'd like some feedback please, like what can i do to make it better, what's good and bad about it please.
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FD3_nF3LKT8[/url][/QUOTE]
ok this is really funny in my opinion, well done mate =)
i knwo im gunna get like some things saying dumb or disagree, but i dont care its good!
[QUOTE=Skidmarks;21001673]In comparison to any other gmod video about that song it is decent.
anyway im not gonna bitch just cause you don't like it, still you tell me to turn these things off but don't give me the commands, i can't turn it off and there's no point making a new thread if i can find out here.
i know how to disable the hud with cl_drawhud 0
how do i remove death notices the red death screen and the flat line sound?[/QUOTE]
To disable death notices: hud_deathnotice_time 0
Commands and an description of them -
sv_cheats 1 - Permits the usage and control of several entities ingame as well as spawning them and lets you do things that would not be normally be allowed in the game e.g Noclip allows you do go through walls but still sustain damage depending on the game modification.
r_drawvgui 1 - This variable turns off all known animated HUD, such as your health bar and death notices as stated before.
Bind - Binding allows you to attach a command to a key from your QUERTY keyboard such as P for "kill" which removes your entity (otherwise killing your character).
toggle - Using this in conjuction with a command allows you (with any binded key) to turn this variable on or off, here's an example:
Bind l "toggle r_drawvgui" - This is what you want isn't it?
Wow my series I'm making is even worse than this guys video, I'm glad I didn't bother showing it to you guys.
He stated it was his first video and you all be a bunch of twats.
Just tell him the commands. Give him GOOD critisism and not things like
[QUOTE=Kybalt;21001815]Shit is still shit no matter how much less shitty it smells.[/QUOTE]
Like he said, IT'S HIS FIRST VIDEO.
Don't all turn into 5 years olds "OMG IT SUCKS SO BAD. DO THIS AND THAT AND SHUT UP IDIOT"
Everyone understand that?
[QUOTE=elite879;21126867]Wow my series I'm making is even worse than this guys video, I'm glad I didn't bother showing it to you guys.
He stated it was his first video and you all be a bunch of twats.
Just tell him the commands. Give him GOOD critisism and not things like
Like he said, IT'S HIS FIRST VIDEO.
Don't all turn into 5 years olds "OMG IT SUCKS SO BAD. DO THIS AND THAT AND SHUT UP IDIOT"
Everyone understand that?[/QUOTE]
First of all, thanks for sticking up for me, I can hold my own but thanks for that anyway. Secondly, sorry to bring you down but it's not my "First" video, it's my first one that I'm proud of, hence the title.
I don't mind how people criticize me I'm used to it now, after having my old you tube account banned which had over 300 subs I'm used to taking criticism on all scales, including the badly spelled ones.
Thanks for finally adding the Commands though, this will help, the Toggle one is what i was after the most. Thanks.
Downs - Execution is poorly done. Ragmorph can be better utilized. Not commenting on the graphics though. Not everyone has a alien super computer in which to crack up the settings.
Ups - Idea is funny. Song went well to the thought behind it. And I did watch to the end. And I did smile and laugh here and there.
So yes keep practicing. You do have the right ideas.
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