[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L1feZMTOUyw[/media]
Q&A
Q: What is this shit!?
A: its a teaser for a 15-20 minute short ill be doing over the summer
Q: Oh great scoutkings making another movie were a guy sees shovels as his wife and offs him self
A: WRONGG!!!!, no one offs them selves, its not some boring dark movie, it will contain murders, car jacking, cop chases, prison escapes, and more.
Q: sounds like some shoot em up movie
A: WRONG again silly man, 1/3 of it will contain all of the action I listed, some of it will be, get this, story development, and all the action will too.
Q: oh great, its something for scoutking to thrust his filter dick on and cum over
A: WRONGG again, Filters are going to be used very rarely, there are two settings for the movie, Room and Memory, Memory will have no filters applied, for memories are generally less darker then the room.
Q: so whens this shit gonna be out
A: fall or early winter
Looks and sound nice.
[QUOTE=ScoutKing;21332955]Q: oh great, its something for scoutking to thrust his filter dick on and cum over[/QUOTE]
I thought that was [B]my[/B] role :v:
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3797350/img/oa5_emptyshell.png[/img]
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Also, the music that's in this teaser was composed by me :eng101:
[url]http://maxofs2d.cafegaming.fr/?pages/music-armolithae-daftrobot[/url]
[QUOTE=Max of S2D;21333241]I thought that was [B]my[/B] role :v:
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3797350/img/oa5_emptyshell.png[/img]
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Also, the music that's in this teaser was composed by me :eng101:
[url]http://maxofs2d.cafegaming.fr/?pages/music-armolithae-daftrobot[/url][/QUOTE]
Ill be using a few others of your songs.
It looks good, voice acting is very good, if not a tad monotone.
However the title card was just awful, switch the font up to something a bit more creative or stylish-looking.
[QUOTE=FumplesAlt;21335648]It looks good, voice acting is very good, if not a tad monotone.
However the title card was just awful, switch the font up to something a bit more creative or stylish-looking.[/QUOTE]
Agreed
[QUOTE=FumplesAlt;21335648]It looks good, voice acting is very good, if not a tad monotone.
However the title card was just awful, switch the font up to something a bit more creative or stylish-looking.[/QUOTE]
Thats the next thing im going to work on, just for the teaser, I didn't want to give away too much, so i decided to just go with the title and a black backdrop.
looking good so far scout. but yeah. the title.
The voice acting was pretty bad. There could have been a lot more done with it.
Other than that, it looked alright, nothing really revealing about the plot, so there's not much to be said.
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I do quite like the transition into the blackness.
[QUOTE=G71tc4;21359476]The voice acting was pretty bad. There could have been a lot more done with it.
Other than that, it looked alright, nothing really revealing about the plot, so there's not much to be said.
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I do quite like the transition into the blackness.[/QUOTE]
ive worked with alot of voice actor, and CaLeB is far the best.
[QUOTE=G71tc4;21359476]The voice acting was pretty bad. There could have been a lot more done with it.[/QUOTE]
I've heard much, much worse... keep in mind that this is done by an amateur for no money, so it's pretty good
[QUOTE=G71tc4;21359476]The voice acting was pretty bad. There could have been a lot more done with it.[/QUOTE]
Totally disagree. the voice acting was good.
[QUOTE=G71tc4;21359476]The voice acting was pretty bad. There could have been a lot more done with it.
Other than that, it looked alright, nothing really revealing about the plot, so there's not much to be said.
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I do quite like the transition into the blackness.[/QUOTE]
Yeah honestly, the voice acting was great for a lengthy g-mod machinima.. usually (in the case of my first 10-min movie) it's a low-quality pitch edited voice, but this one was very good, and the faceposing was done well
[QUOTE=FumplesAlt;21364215]Yeah honestly, the voice acting was great for a lengthy g-mod machinima.. usually (in the case of my first 10-min movie) it's a low-quality pitch edited voice, but this one was very good, and the faceposing was done well[/QUOTE]
Faceposing isnt going to be a major thing for this.
Looks like it's going to be pretty good.
[QUOTE=Max of S2D;21362018]I've heard much, much worse... keep in mind that this is done by an amateur for no money, so it's pretty good[/QUOTE]
Just because you've heard worse doesn't make this the best. All you guys seem to be going on is that it's good compared to others, which doesn't mean much as far as total quality goes.
The voice was boring, it didn't feel attached to the character, and one of the lines was pretty badly slurred. Besides, this is my opinion, I'm not trying to overrule yours, just stating my thoughts.
[QUOTE=G71tc4;21378969]Just because you've heard worse doesn't make this the best. All you guys seem to be going on is that it's good compared to others, which doesn't mean much as far as total quality goes.
The voice was boring, it didn't feel attached to the character, and one of the lines was pretty badly slurred. Besides, this is my opinion, I'm not trying to overrule yours, just stating my thoughts.[/QUOTE]
you cant read can you, he said hes seen worse, and its good for a [B]amateur that dosn't get paid[/B]
Your demand of quality for machinma and non paid amateur, actors is really high...
wait wait wait,, you got bored with a 30 second teaser (not counting the last 30), how... how is that possible.....
[QUOTE=G71tc4;21378969]Just because you've heard worse doesn't make this the best.[/QUOTE]
Never stated that either
The default vegas font at the end ruined it, but good work.
[QUOTE=ScoutKing;21379321]you cant read can you, he said hes seen worse, and its good for a [B]amateur that dosn't get paid[/B]
Your demand of quality for machinma and non paid amateur, actors is really high...
wait wait wait,, you got bored with a 30 second teaser (not counting the last 30), how... how is that possible.....[/QUOTE]
Sure, he's good for an amateur, but he's not really good. And I expect if you want someone to watch it, they'd want a decent machinima. I've only commented on the voice, really, so you don't know my "demand of quality for machinima". But if it entertains, it entertains, if not, oh well.
And I got bored of a 30 second teaser because it was [B]boring.[/B]
[QUOTE=G71tc4;21390868]Sure, he's good for an amateur, but he's not really good. And I expect if you want someone to watch it, they'd want a decent machinima. I've only commented on the voice, really, so you don't know my "demand of quality for machinima". But if it entertains, it entertains, if not, oh well.
And I got bored of a 30 second teaser because it was [B]boring.[/B][/QUOTE]
someone needs some riddlin.
your not making sense, your logic reminds me of some dumb republican kid at my school who says "obama is stupid because hes stupid"
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[QUOTE=geogzm;21387204]The default vegas font at the end ruined it, but good work.[/QUOTE]
It is a temporary title card.
excuse me but you sir, are the only one who thought this teaser was dire. you must have high expectations that cannot be met...
[QUOTE=ToNz;21392501]excuse me but you sir, are the only one who thought this teaser was dire. you must have high expectations that cannot be met...[/QUOTE]
this post was boring, ToNz stop being so boring...
[QUOTE=ScoutKing;21393036]this post was boring, ToNz stop being so boring...[/QUOTE]
For one thing, I think [B]my opinion[/B] makes perfect sense, the voice actor should be more into his part.
And the video bored me because [B]in my opinion[/B] it was boring, uninvolved dialogue that was panning over an [B]in my opinion[/B] generic street shot. Like I said, [B]In my opinion,[/B] I liked the transition to the black, but other than that, it was stale [B]in my opinion[/B]. Prove me wrong with the movie, and I will admit [B]not[/B] that I was wrong, but that the movie differed greatly from [B]my opinion[/B] of the trailer.
Fuck, want me to explain what an opinion is? You obviously aren't getting it.
[B]In my opinion[/B] your post is boring, it didn't have enough bold, I liked your transition to non bold, but besides that it was boring, because it was boring.
how can you decide if the voice actors into his "plot" if you have no idea what the plot is, and from 30 second teaser, that you find boring, chances are you didn't pay much attention.
didn't you say to max the voice acting isnt the best, when he said it was good in his opinion, you obviously don't understand a opinion as proven earlier.
I suggest you, hit the big blue button, that points to the left, on the top left of your browser before you make your self look more of a fool.
FYI he is so post to sound emotional less and detached, that will change later on because thats called, story/character development, you obvious don't understand tone either.
watch this
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v3ki5zDIKXs[/media]
Notice the voice, he sounds emotional less, out of touch, that is the idea.
better voice acting yes, the voice actor in that teaser i am showing actually dose alot of work for machinma.com directors.
[QUOTE=ScoutKing;21393328][B]In my opinion[/B] your post is boring, it didn't have enough bold, I liked your transition to non bold, but besides that it was boring, because it was boring. [I][B]
That is probably the stupidest fucking thing I've ever heard. We're talking about promoting a movie, not reading a message.[/B][/I]
how can you decide if the voice actors into his "plot" if you have no idea what the plot is, and from 30 second teaser, that you find boring, chances are you didn't pay much attention. [I][B]
I've watched it a few times to back up my [U]opinions. [/U]And from what I've seen, he seems to be spewing back lines that you've given instead of [U]acting[/U] them. [/B][/I]
didn't you say to max the voice acting isnt the best, when he said it was good in his opinion, you obviously don't understand a opinion as proven earlier.
I suggest you, hit the big blue button, that points to the left, on the top left of your browser before you make your self look more of a fool. [I][B]
You're really starting to look like an idiot at this point. I was defending my point, as you were blatantly denying it, defending your point, which I am perfectly fine with, seeing as thought that's your opinion.[/B][/I]
FYI he is so post to sound emotional less and detached, that will change later on because thats called, story/character development, you obvious don't understand tone either. [I][B]
I understand story/character development perfectly well, but as stated above, he didn't seem devoid of emotion when I heard him, he looked bored and character-less.[/B][/I]
watch this
[URL="http://www.facepunch.com/#"]View YouTUBE video[/URL]
[URL]http://youtube.com/watch?v=v3ki5zDIKXs[/URL]
Notice the voice, he sounds emotional less, out of touch, that is the idea.
better voice acting yes, the voice actor in that teaser i am showing actually dose alot of work for machinma.com directors. [I][B]
So, you just tried to back up your attack with the work of someone else? Grats.[/B][/I][/QUOTE]
I'm just going to dissect this post.
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Preparing for more unintelligible text.
[QUOTE=G71tc4;21393630]I'm just going to dissect this post.
[editline]11:50PM[/editline]
Preparing for more unintelligible text.[/QUOTE]
someone dosn't understand... sarcasm..
Lets dissect this post, because this post is what i have a problem with
[QUOTE=G71tc4;21390868]I got bored of a 30 second teaser because it was [B]boring.[/B][/QUOTE]
you backed up your point a day later, you backed it up, even if what you backed up was pretty. yeah, disagreeable.
but lets dissect this
[QUOTE=G71tc4;21390868]I got bored of a 30 second teaser because it was [B]boring.[/B][/QUOTE]
So you were backing up your point with your point.
ill translate this into a math problem
A+A=A
Lets make A, 10, so
A=10
10+10=10 is wrong, or to make it simple, your logic IE point A's evidence is Points A evidence, is horrible and logic i expect from a middle school kid.
It bothers me, I use to take debate, you can't prove a point with your point!
A+A can = A (unless 0, but that make your point, worthless as 0 is)
Ill go on, you can't say
A is right because A
now if it was
A is right because of C and D, you at least make sense.
Next time, try posting intelligently first, instead of using middle school/kid logic.
[QUOTE=ScoutKing;21393954]someone dosn't understand... sarcasm..
Lets dissect this post, because this post is what i have a problem with
you backed up your point a day later, you backed it up, even if what you backed up was pretty. yeah, disagreeable.
but lets dissect this
So you were backing up your point with your point.
ill translate this into a math problem
A+A=A
Lets make A, 10, so
A=10
10+10=10 is wrong, or to make it simple, your logic IE point A's evidence is Points A evidence, is horrible and logic i expect from a middle school kid.
It bothers me, I use to take debate, you can't prove a point with your point!
A+A can = A (unless 0, but that make your point, worthless as 0 is)
Ill go on, you can't say
A is right because A
now if it was
A is right because of C and D, you at least make sense.
Next time, try posting intelligently first, instead of using middle school/kid logic.[/QUOTE]
Dude, you just turned opinion into a math problem. That doesn't even make sense. That's like saying "You know who had opinions? [B]HITLER![/B]"
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Just to end argument, I thought the trailer was boring because the voice actor wasn't keyed in on the character he was going to portray, and it seemed like a cliched "The day was good, until it was not!"-style idea..
Sir, before you walk out that door:
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4SJFen40aI4[/media]
[QUOTE=CaLeB-;21394767]Sir, before you walk out that door:
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4SJFen40aI4[/media][/QUOTE]
"LOLOLOLOLOL"
had me.
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