Since the Halo 4 Master Chief Model was released (huge Halo fan),
I decided to give it a GO at making a Scene and editing it.
[B]Constructive Criticism is welcome[/B].
Original
[IMG]http://puu.sh/2ARa1[/IMG]
Edited
[IMG]http://puu.sh/2ARb8[/IMG]
Come on, I need criticism. Comment!!
The posing seems a bit off, to me at least. He doesn't look like he's walking correctly. His left elbow also appears to be broken, but that might just be the angle. Also, I'd think the gun would be positioned differently so he wouldn't reach back and grab it by the barrel.
Other than that, I think it looks rather nice. An artistic for you, sir!
[QUOTE=Mikey Mike 217;40297625]The posing seems a bit off, to me at least. He doesn't look like he's walking correctly. His left elbow also appears to be broken, but that might just be the angle. Also, I'd think the gun would be positioned differently so he wouldn't reach back and grab it by the barrel.
Other than that, I think it looks rather nice. An artistic for you, sir![/QUOTE]
I think his body was leaning.
His body [I]shouldn't[/I] be leaning if he's walking. It looks awkward and unnatural. Along with that, his arms look to be dangling limply. Either way, I love the atmosphere and editing.
In addition to what the people above said, your original image should have been brighter. This goes with most forms of photography, screenshots included, as it is [I]always[/I] better to over-expose a bit then to under-expose. This is because you can remove light (take away detail), but it is very difficult to add light and detail that was never there.
Also, it really brings out the compression in the image.
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