Rebel about to shoot himself with a pistol over the body of a dead combine woman
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This is the alternate ending to [url=http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=831327] this[/url]
[quote] It was only 3 days since the suppression field was deactivated, but the human race was still on it's way to revival. Samuel and Kimberly were two refugees that loved each other before, during, and after the combine rule.
Their love was indestructible, any disagreements they had, they compromised, and hardships they faced, their love survived. Unfortunately, the Combine still had a factory of soldiers in work, away from the citadel, where the newer hunter models were assembled. A group of combine raiders were doing what they can to replace the soldiers the resistance broken, and the combine were working on the "Assassin Project", meaning that the originally scrapped idea for assassins was brought back to life. Kim and Sam were not spared from the raiders, as when they busted in, a hunter rendered Samuel unconscious, and the raiders took Kim away, to this factory.
Sam was crushed when he awoken, the only person he wanted to see, was taken away from him, leaving nothing behind. Sam stood in a corner of his bunker, hands pressed to his face, tears flowing almost infinitely.
Kim was afraid, afraid of what they would do to her, afraid of what happened to Sam, afraid of what they will do to the others, she didn't want to become one of the things she hated most. She watched as a piece of hardware covered and closed her mouth, and other pieces of hardware reshaping, removing, and adding to her body, no human should ever feel the pain she did.
Two weeks after the transfer to white forest, Kim was still on Samuel's mind. He still to this day did not know what they have done to her, as she could have became a stalker or even food for the hunters, the more he thought about it, the worse he felt, and soon, he fell into a panic-like state.
Kim was deployed as the new assassin model, on a trip to white forest, in an attempt to help the striders make it to the silo to keep the portal storm active.
The combine was unsuccessful, and the field watch found no traces of anything serious, when the other rebels went inside, Sam stood outside with his AR2 loaded and ready for any last soldier.
Kim watched the rebels go inside, but as new as her combine soldier model was, she overlooked Samuel, She jumped from ever a rock, but Sam was still trigger happy, he raised his gun, and fired one bulled square into her heart. She tripped over her feet, and fell head-first onto a rock. Sam ran up to the body with his 9mm handgun in his hand, as the synth attempted to get up, he kicked her back down, and then kicked her helmet off. Sam thought he was seeing things, as the last combine he killed that day was the one girl he was in love with. The assassin let out one last cough, and her eyes rolled upward into her head, and passed away.
Samuel was still dumbfounded as to what he had taken part into, he put his hand on her neck, pulled away, hunched himself over her corpse, released a few tears, brought up his handgun, pressed it against his skull, and pulled back the trigger, his body landing on hers, he wanted to be dead with her.
Either way, whoever killed the other that day, they were still in love, and they spent the rest of forever in each others arms in heaven.[/quote]
It's possibly not my best work, but better than some things I've done in the past...
Here is the edit:
[img]http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/6054/suiciderebelnofilter.jpg[/img]
The edit with a filter (which to be honest I think is overdone, It didn't glow that much when I filtered it...):
[url]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/8113/suiciderebelfilter.jpg[/url]
The original:
[url]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6843/ep2outland120002.jpg[/url]
Older work along the love and death with an added story:
[url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=831327[/url]
[url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=830597[/url]
Emo.
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The tear is so emo too.
Blood looks smeared, tears are good, posing good. 7/10. :tiphat:
On second thought, look at the face of the lady from the side, it looks like she got something stuck up her intestine. Bad case of diarrhea?
[QUOTE=Camarilla;17935801]Blood looks smeared, tears are good, posing good. 7/10. :tiphat:[/QUOTE]
Think you could help me with the blood? I use gimp by the way.
Go search custom GIMP brushes on :google: there are good splatter and blood brushes there.
Thanks for that.
Any ideas for another image and story?
Just an idea for a better angle:
A silhouette of him on his knees on the floor looking over the body, with the gun to his head looking down towards the body. All facing away from the camera.
Agh! Low poly gun model! Use this:[url]http://www.fpsbanana.com/skins/41477[/url]
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