• Maxwell's Silver Hammer
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I would gladly accept criticism and advice on how to improve :) [video=youtube;qpCV2wgoxC8]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qpCV2wgoxC8[/video] [IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/hl2_2013-05-08_23-21-32-65.jpg[/IMG]
start by cropping out the useless empty uninteresting wasted space [img]http://files.1337upload.net/cropped_1.jpg[/img] after that try to look into making their faces less... comic-like? their expressions currently aren't very lifelike; quite the opposite, they're overexaggerated to hell and back, plus the woman's stare is eerily lifeless. remember to use fingerposing too
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