• Cybernazi Police checks a dead resistance paratrooper in a futuristic jewish ghetto
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these models are cool but i know, that phong is making me crazy. [URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/d1_trainstation_020001_edit.jpg[/IMG][/URL] its my first :)
Not a great idea to post your first pose. It's pretty alright, though. Turn up your graphics when you're taking pictures as well. We can't see how slow you are in a picture.
what can i do to make it better?
The depth of field sucks. EVERYTHING is blurry. There's nothing that indicates it's a ghetto either; the dead paratrooper's 'death pose' is awkward. The kneeling soldier is somehow missing a left foot(from my angle). Effects are okay. Blood on the soldier is very awkward; it's almost like he's wearing the blood like a skin.
not a good scene. Like the nazi model though...enhance it, then it's a #1 gmod download.
the model is not mine. I got it from here, though. its called "DODS Cp"
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