• Red cleaners (Short comic)
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May continue with the comic after I'm done with my exams and all that rubbish. [IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/comic19.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/comic24.png[/IMG] [IMG] http://filesmelt.com/dl/comic32.png[/IMG]
That was awesome! I vote you could do more ^_^
The dialogues a bit cheesy and awkward, and the posing and angling's a bit wonky. But pretty good effort.
i can say its better than your last comics my job is done here!!
One thing I might recommend is using the actual Russian language text.
The posing is pretty off at times and the speech bubbles look very choppy, but it's definitely interesting.
[QUOTE=Jlflash;40618304]One thing I might recommend is using the actual Russian language text.[/QUOTE]those dudes are chinese
[QUOTE=Joazzz;40619416]those dudes are chinese[/QUOTE] Might I add, one of them is also saying "Mother Fucker!"
Why isn't he looking down the scope? I'd say that's a fairly crucial element to firing a rifle. :v: [IMG]http://puu.sh/2UaMo.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=RainBD7;40656260]Why isn't he looking down the scope? I'd say that's a fairly crucial element to firing a rifle. :v: [IMG]http://puu.sh/2UaMo.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE] 360 noscope
Oh, my apologizes, I didn't see.
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