The Ruins of Indianapolis - Promo

[GoldenBullet]

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Had fun making this

[ChestyMcGee]

Good writing, posing and camera angles throughout. Editing is okay too.

[imMonkeyGOD]

That was good! I liked the model choices you chose

[Santz]

I would naturally give the kind of critisism I give on Screenshots but seen as this is a comic and NO ONE wants to take 4 hours editing each panel, I will shut up and just say that you should make the lasers less opaque.

For a promo is pretty nice, I will look forward to this comic.

[GoldenBullet]

Thanks all

[zacbru]

Okay, let's finish it RIGHT NAOW!

[headshotter]

If you don't finish it I'll rip your balls off... this is pure awesomeness.

[Jim_Riley]

Sounds promising. I'll be looking forward to this.

[GoldenBullet]

:love:

[Rastifan]

This looks good. A comic with decent editing even. I will pay attention to this one.

[Domino]

Nice one dude ^^
Enjoyable to read, and overall good editing :D

[GoldenBullet]

[QUOTE=Domino;21519709]Nice one dude ^^
Enjoyable to read, and overall good editing :D[/QUOTE]

Thanks mate

[Hollow]

hmm very interesting

[Skaarj636]

Pretty cool!

[GoldenBullet]

Thanks you two.

[Enhanced_AI]

Raaaagh

[GoldenBullet]

[QUOTE=Enhanced_AI;21525918]Raaaagh[/QUOTE]

well said

[ZeekyPoe]

Too be honest, nothing really sticks out. Also Alyx's face posing on the second panel is a little odd.
Otherwise, it was pretty good. Looking forwards to more.

[GoldenBullet]

[QUOTE=Zeekybomb343;21528005]Too be honest, nothing really sticks out. Also Alyx's face posing on the second panel is a little odd.
Otherwise, it was pretty good. Looking forwards to more.[/QUOTE]

Thanks, but i don't really know what you mean by "nothing really sticks out" could you explain? :smile:

[ZeekyPoe]

[QUOTE=GoldenBullet;21528549]Thanks, but i don't really know what you mean by "nothing really sticks out" could you explain? :smile:[/QUOTE]
It has nothing special. There is nothing that other comics or series don't have that sticks out to me in particular.

[Cheese123]

Im lost. Wuts happening?

[GoldenBullet]

[QUOTE=Zeekybomb343;21538234]It has nothing special. There is nothing that other comics or series don't have that sticks out to me in particular.[/QUOTE]

Oh sure i understand! Hopefully i'll implement some of the ideas i'm having into the first issue that will do otherwise :)

[Mosquito]

I liked the "BFFXX!" effect, haha it made me laugh, but this comic is actually really well made.

[Merv]

I stopped running.

[GoldenBullet]

[QUOTE=Mosquito;21540724]I liked the "BFFXX!" effect, haha it made me laugh, but this comic is actually really well made.[/QUOTE]

:love:

[Evenios]

i like the poses and the shots. very comic book like :-) the droids looked cool too!

[ZeekyPoe]

[QUOTE=GoldenBullet;21539674]Oh sure i understand! Hopefully i'll implement some of the ideas i'm having into the first issue that will do otherwise :)[/QUOTE]
Indeed. Can't wait.

[bishibosh]

I live in Indianapolis.

:saddowns:

[Devil Traitor]

I can't wait for the next one.

[Haxxer]

What ChestyMcGee said.

God damn, I want tutorials on lasers :C