RwG is a new bunch of mini episode-like things i am making.
I completed #1 nice n' simple, working on #2 right now.
It is my first video so please rate and comment, Thanks!
RwG #1
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dy50mu6qoFY[/media]
Rwg #2
*work in progress!*
Recommended to watch in HD fullscreen!
Improvements to make:
Never make the the intro that long unless its entertaining.
Show the title once.
Use different maps.
Get half-life 2 (checker textures).
What?
That wasn't at all entertaining, and the segments dragged on too much, especially the intro, or whatever that was with the combine in the beginning.
[QUOTE=AttemptedPants;29906288]What?
That wasn't at all entertaining, and the segments dragged on too much, especially the intro, or whatever that was with the combine in the beginning.[/QUOTE]
I will try not to make things that long again sorry.
Just because i feel like it i will give this some constructive criticism while i'm watching it.
Intro:
-There are two very very obvious editing mistakes that could be changed easily (the text disappearing before it exits the screen)
-Why do we need to see the title three times? First RWG than Random with Gmod #1 and than RWG: #1
Cat scene:
Good attempt but again a bit messy in the editing, it should've been speedup and more a-bit
Can part:
Cool be good put poor execution with just being in gm_construct
Zombie:
One of the better scenes just could use some better voice for the citizen
Objection:
Checkerboard textures
Credits:
A bit way-to-overused song
Well dunno if it's your first video but it could be a lot worse. (It seem that it is your first video)
Thanks for the reply. Wow alot of mistakes made there! I'll list the things I will do to imrpove my videos in the main post. Thanks!
Biggest mistake was the Benny Hill song at the end.
[QUOTE=TheGoodDoctorF;29931398]Biggest mistake was the Benny Hill song at the end.[/QUOTE]
I figured that out, thanks for the reply though.
well i liked the nyan cat i guess
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