I realize this picture needs alot more tweaking, but I guess I was just too lazy today.
[img]http://juraviel.miumau.net/Random/1%20Pictures/Nothing_Personal.jpg[/img]
Some notes:
- I'm not happy with how bright "Alyx's" lips are.
- Blood needs to be more... liquid-like
- I realize that the rebel wouldn't bleed on his hands as fast as he is doing in this picture. (note that the assassin has just partion of a second ago slashed her victim)
Oh well, C&C please :)
I agree with what you said in your notes but i'm not liking the blur in the background.
apart from notes choke blur mask about 1 to 2 pixels. blur's a little intense
Looks like she was humping him then slit his throat.
I was expecting the combine assassin.
Blood looks like feathers, her eyes should be open looking at him(An assasin wouldn't mind looking at some blood). Lots of empty space, not to mention the boring camera angle. It's also really odd that she had to hop on him to slit his throat and her right shoulder is also pointing up too much.
:pervert:
[QUOTE=Pvt. Martin;18325726]:pervert:[/QUOTE]
More like...
:flashfap:
That assasin is old, she looks 70.
[QUOTE=madmanmad;18326361]That assasin is old, she looks 70.[/QUOTE]
Don't forget the manly hands.
[QUOTE=MoldFungus;18325206]Blood looks like feathers, her eyes should be open looking at him(An assasin wouldn't mind looking at some blood). Lots of empty space, not to mention the boring camera angle. It's also really odd that she had to hop on him to slit his throat and her right shoulder is also pointing up too much.[/QUOTE]
Agree with you about the blood.
Why should she have her eyes open? In the "title" it says "Nothing Personal..." Could this mean she knew the rebel and didn't actually want to kill him?
Agree with you about the empty space and camera.
And having her hop on him like that added abit feeling into the picture in my opinion.
Have an "agree" anyway :)
[QUOTE=madmanmad]That assasin is old, she looks 70.[/QUOTE]
I de-inflated the real models (gasmask) head and added FakeFactory Alyx head. Camera Angle and editing do not really flatter her face.
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