• Bill wheeling away from a Tank
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[URL=http://img91.imageshack.us/i/l4dhospital04interiorda.jpg/][IMG]http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/9017/l4dhospital04interiorda.jpg[/IMG][/URL] While messing around in the Mercy Hospital map, I saw a wheelchair lying around and so this was the result. :smug: Criticism welcome, I definantly could use improvement. ze clock
posing on the tank is extremely minimal. not sure if you forgot about it or something
Tank looks like he's unposed at all. Sharpening wasn't very good. And I think that DOF wasn't necessary.
Thanks for the feedback, guys. Upon further inspection though, I do agree that the DOF wasn't really needed. ^^; Anyway, about the Tank's posing, I had originally intended to have him leaning foward a bit more as if he were recklessly charging to get ol' Beel. Sadly, the result of that was the Tank's puny head being stuck looking at the floor. :v: Any ideas on how I could have posed him to avoid that?
[QUOTE=Lite :3;18354683]Thanks for the feedback, guys. Upon further inspection though, I do agree that the DOF wasn't really needed. ^^; Anyway, about the Tank's posing, I had originally intended to have him leaning foward a bit more as if he were recklessly charging to get ol' Beel. Sadly, the result of that was the Tank's puny head being stuck looking at the floor. :v: Any ideas on how I could have posed him to avoid that?[/QUOTE] Tank's arms really help making a solid posture, he's like a gorilla. You shouldn't pose him like a normal person bending forward, that usually doesn't work. I guess I can show you a [url=http://www.sourceop.com/hell-met/poses/class15.jpg][u]sample[/u][/url], even though I'm not even entirely happy with it.
Love bill's face.
Poor Bill.
Good idea but never use sharpen because it can completely ruin a good picture. Posing on Bill is pretty good but the tank is off. Here is an example on how you should have posed him. [media]http://www.progaming-tips.com/images/l4d-tank.jpg[/media] Also dont use Simple DOF because it looks bad and theres much wasted space on the left.
[QUOTE=Hell-met;18356405]Tank's arms really help making a solid posture, he's like a gorilla. You shouldn't pose him like a normal person bending forward, that usually doesn't work. I guess I can show you a [url=http://www.sourceop.com/hell-met/poses/class15.jpg][u]sample[/u][/url], even though I'm not even entirely happy with it.[/QUOTE] You pretty much hit the nail on the head there with the pic; perfect example of how I wanted to have him posed.
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