My First Attempt at Producing Good Screenshots - Garry's Mod

These are the first serious attempts at screenshots which I have done. Please be fair and give creative criticism =) The 3rd one is my personal favourite! [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/HEjTl.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/m6BBh.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/B2FcC.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/8WpbH.jpg[/IMG]

Better than my first poses for sure, just watch out for the clipping on the ragdolls and try to make it smooth. Also, faceposing is really a must if your going to show the whole face. :buddy:

[QUOTE=Charred13;30650252] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/B2FcC.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE] Give an expression on this one and fix the posing.

[QUOTE=Steven :D;30650311]Better than my first poses for sure, just watch out for the clipping on the ragdolls and try to make it smooth. Also, faceposing is really a must if your going to show the whole face. :buddy:[/QUOTE] Ahh yes, forgot about that one. I've got it saved so I'll improve on that one until I think it's perfect

I can't get over those Russian's chimp faces.

The teeth... [img]http://www.maskworld.com/pix/teeth/character/3000-austin-powers.jpg[/img]

Hahahah god dammit that guy in the first pic made me spray my coffee all over my screen.. I hate you.

Okay, had a go at improving the ones which you guys said needed work. For the WWII one I think its just a bad model for faceposing... [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/NZLep.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/Uq3Rt.jpg[/IMG]

I see a lack of editing on this one [QUOTE=Charred13;30654325] [IMG_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/Uq3Rt.jpg[/IMG_thumb][/QUOTE] [editline]23nd June 2011[/editline] [img]http://www.imgjoe.com/x/45zeq3pz.jpg[/img] voilà. That's better

[QUOTE=Charred13;30654325]Okay, had a go at improving the ones which you guys said needed work. For the WWII one I think its just a bad model for faceposing... [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/NZLep.jpg[/IMG] [/QUOTE] Is that supposed to be a blood spray? Because if so that is a great use of the tree model and I love it.

[QUOTE=kevinseven;30693314]Is that supposed to be a blood spray? Because if so that is a great use of the tree model and I love it.[/QUOTE] Yeah, I didn't have any models that cast a shadow which looks anything like a splatter so i had to settle for that lol

[QUOTE=Charred13;30702047]Yeah, I didn't have any models that cast a shadow which looks anything like a splatter so i had to settle for that lol[/QUOTE] I..oh...so thats what that was.

Fix the arm on the Nick one and an angrier expression, not struggling. You're already showing improvement, which is good.

[QUOTE=Charred13;30654325][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/NZLep.jpg[/IMG][/quote] Apparently Nick is fighting Medusa.