Latest strip, just finished it.
You guys are getting it first (Before I even upload it on the website).
I'm aware the blur looks odd in places (more like his arms are just blurred out instead of in-motion) but it was my first time attempting something like this having never really used photoshop that much.
Also, that baseball cap was a f***ing nightmare.
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[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/r9tYSK0.jpg[/IMG]
Looking back the humour seems rather infantile to me, but let me know what you guys think!
whatatwist
The plot thickens.
half-assed
[QUOTE=Bubz;42892797]half-assed[/QUOTE]
That's not constructive criticism.
don't bother with Bubz
I see an improvement in editing, which makes me a happy panda. Kind of wish the doctor had mentioned "hemorrhoids" instead of "herpes" because then the "you may want to sit down" would've been so ironic.
Is jpeg_quality set to 100 though? It looks a bit compressed to me, but could be my imagination. That's not a big flaw though, just a minor thing to improve even further.
Overall, good job, I see you're quickly getting better - and I really appreciate you taking criticism and actually applying it, because that is not as common as you might think - and I'm really amazed at the speed you do these. Looking forward to the next one!
Very clever work ^^
The blur on the arms was kinda useless in my opinion.
Otherwise, its ok
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