A man walking away from a trainwreck (scenebuild)

[Deri102]

It's been a while since I've made a pose. And this is my first ever scene build.. So go easy on me.

[img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/gm_flatgrass0074.jpg[/img]

C&C is appreciated

[Spongmana]

Scene in the back looks nice, only the trees are to repetive.
Add different trees or change their size/placement a bit. So they don't look all lined up.

[stea1th]

you can still see flatgrass, cover up the entire place with grass or put in extra foliage to cover the default ground. the alternate but harder way is to edit it, but adding in extra props would be easier. there is also very visible clipping on his left hand, and his right hand doesn't look finger posed. for someone walking away from a train wreck he seems like a brick wall with no feelings. other than those problems, quite a good scenebuild.

[Caste]

Do not use ugly trees from episode two and I think you should improve your posing.

[Deri102]

[QUOTE=stea1th;18483796]you can still see flatgrass, cover up the entire place with grass or put in extra foliage to cover the default ground. the alternate but harder way is to edit it, but adding in extra props would be easier. there is also very visible clipping on his left hand, and his right hand doesn't look finger posed. for someone walking away from a train wreck he seems like a brick wall with no feelings. other than those problems, quite a good scenebuild.[/QUOTE]

Thanks, is there an addon or something for more foliage? Because the HL2 EP2 gets repetitive when I use it for grass..

[stea1th]

[QUOTE=Deri102;18483813]Thanks, is there an addon or something for more foliage? Because the HL2 EP2 gets repetitive when I use it for grass..[/QUOTE]
yeah, i'll provide a link but garrysmod.org is slow
just search "foliage" and you'll see a pack, if i'm not wrong it's still there.

[Deri102]

Well I'm downloading the "L4D foliage pack" and the "Foliage Pack"

[stea1th]

yup, that's the one i think

[the-dutch-guy]

Get some COD 4/COD MW2 rag-dolls they are perfect for poses like this.

[Deri102]

[QUOTE=the-dutch-guy;18483965]Get some COD 4/COD MW2 rag-dolls they are perfect for poses like this.[/QUOTE]

I would, but I'm a bad poser, and these are simple models..

[Resistance777]

pretty good.

maybe some effects in the backround though, like smoke.

[Uncle_Earl]

why did the train crash with A BUILDING?

[Egg_Toaster]

He's hold his gun wrong, the butt of the gun should be at his shoulder.

[Deri102]

[QUOTE=Uncle_Earl;18488192]why did the train crash with A BUILDING?[/QUOTE]

Combines and science from outer space came.