my very first comic, dont be very rude against me, btw im not english, so my spelling could be wrong. :) :dandruff:
[img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/3070/unled1qk.jpg[/img]
[editline]26th June 2011[/editline]
why nobody is comenting mine first? :S
Very nice for a first comic.
The English is noticeably wrong; maybe you can ask someone to fix it when you finish a comic? Either that or practice English.
The comic shows promise, but the bad grammar is what kills it for me.
[QUOTE=Lunik;30732693]The English is noticeably wrong; maybe you can ask someone to fix it when you finish a comic? Either that or practice English.
The comic shows promise, but the bad grammar is what kills it for me.[/QUOTE]
could u, sir, rewrite here wrong sentences, and write right ones? i saved the psd file and could update my comic :)
if u wanna, u can change a bit of speech style
[QUOTE=Fort83;30742587]Before you write, maybe give the draft of what you want to say to someone who speaks english well enough.[/QUOTE]
ok sir!
but it would be nice for help, now.
crappy posing and it doesnt even make a sense to me
liked that, good idea, when will u do next part?
Epic
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