This is GoldStripe
They are (badly) reskinned soldiers for a faction in a comic series I plan on starting whenever
[IMG]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/002/e/c/deployment_by_kokyal0rd-d70iz0u.png[/IMG]
There are 3 standard issue male soldiers, 2 female specialists, and a male heavy
Any criticism is appreciated (praised)
They look less like soldiers and more like rescue team you'd see after a disaster. Bright yellow stripes don't suit combat.
Editing wise: Glass on goggles is too bright and flashlight rays look more like laser sabers. Decrease opacity on those.
Overall it is nice though, me likey. Have an artistic, mate.
[QUOTE=RUSSIAN BEAR;43394431]They look less like soldiers and more like rescue team you'd see after a disaster. Bright yellow stripes don't suit combat.
Editing wise: Glass on goggles is too bright and flashlight rays look more like laser sabers. Decrease opacity on those.
Overall it is nice though, me likey. Have an artistic, mate.[/QUOTE]
If yellow isn't suited for combat, what would you suggest as a replacement?
I'm just trying to go for something more unique here
They reminded me Agency Grunt suit from Hitman: Absolution. Anyway, nice work.
[QUOTE=wotman;43394522]If yellow isn't suited for combat, what would you suggest as a replacement?
I'm just trying to go for something more unique here[/QUOTE]
A less bright tone of yellow, or simply a bit less yellow. Perhaps remove the thigh belts.
Also I see "Gale Stripe" on their shoulders (pardon me if I misread that). With that they look more like PMCs in which case I guess it's okay to have something that stands out.
It's your artistic vision though. Do what you think is right.
Cool picture, but I don't think a night op with flashlights on and bright bright yellow stripes on your clothing is going to help :v:
EDIT: Maybe a dark red instead of yellow? Or a green?
[QUOTE=RUSSIAN BEAR;43394750]A less bright tone of yellow, or simply a bit less yellow. Perhaps remove the thigh belts.
Also I see "Gale Stripe" on their shoulders (pardon me if I misread that). With that they look more like PMCs in which case I guess it's okay to have something that stands out.
It's your artistic vision though. Do what you think is right.[/QUOTE]
They actually are more like PMC's, but work with the government when they request it.
[QUOTE=Prototype556;43394816]Cool picture, but I don't think a night op with flashlights on and bright bright yellow stripes on your clothing is going to help :v:
EDIT: Maybe a dark red instead of yellow? Or a green?[/QUOTE]
Actually, green sounds like a nice idea.
EDIT: I changed the color to a duller yellow, and I must say it looks much better.
Very interesting soldiers :)
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