I really like this one, Nick's pose and Ellis' wounds especially. Ellis got pounced on by a Hunter, that's why his face is covered in blood.
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C&C please!
Nice angle, the posing looks good but there is something that is bugging me...
Is it just me or the Coach looks like he is floating?
Walking poses look better if you have the front foot on the ground and the back foot in the air, as opposed to the other way around.
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Great camera angle though.
Thanks guys! How did I do on the posing and Ellis' wounds? Anything I need to improve on?
Ha, I just compared the edit to the original. Some of the burning is good (under his jacket) but some of it looks so half-hearted and arbitrary. Go easy on the dodging too, it looks very out of place.
As for the wounds, they're not bad although a little flat and maybe a tad too bright.
Got it, your criticism is well appreciated and will be put to use in future pictures :smile:
Uh oh, Rochelle looks like she's starting to turn.
Nah, just resting... [i]Or is she?[/i]
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Nick is cross eyed.
rochelles neck looks to straight, like her head just turned down without moving her neck
[QUOTE=Java Llama;18567937]rochelles neck looks to straight, like her head just turned down without moving her neck[/QUOTE]
Rochelle's neck was fucked up by Valve, is nearly impossible to pose her head right.
Santz is right, I just tried to make her look as natural as possible.
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