Finally got my pc back, time to try some new things.
If you want, try to start to listen this at minute 5:26
[video=youtube;BhNy5S6oDtY]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BhNy5S6oDtY[/video]
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The filter's a bit bright and there's a lot of empty space. Posing's alright, though.
the posing on the chaos dude is p good. could use more... contempt though. he looks a bit too relaxed to be executing a loyalist weaking scumbag
there's some unneeded space on both sides of the picture and the angle is fish-eyed. you should tone down the filter too. work on your composition
Needs a little less green..unless the Seed of Chaos fiddled with the planet's atmosphere again.
Thanks for the suggestions, I tried to improve a bit. (I kinda like the angle, I don't know if want to change it).
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im just confused as to why the space marine with the super mega sledge hammer of doom is just going to let himself be executed
btw where'd you get the daemon hammer
Try moving back and zooming in from a different angle.
Why is he kneeling down like that. Space marines are badass the on down a spacemarine would do is getting down to some ass kicking.
So they're going to stab him. Then just incase that doesn't finish the job they have a boltgun to his head? Thats practically a handcannon, at tat range it would be dangerous to use it considering its practically a grenade launcher.
Speaking of canon what is a slanesshi marine and an undivided doing together like that. Chaos marines are notorious for hating each other as much as they hate the imperium. It's supposed to be super difficult to get them to ally together let alone fight next to each other like that.
Looks much better without the crazy filters though. Much better.
the hammer, judging by the polycount and horrible shaders, is one of necrobard's DoW2 ports
also zoom in i can't stand that fisheye
Well he's kneeling like that because he fought an endless horde of chaos marines alone and now he's without any force left, so he's accepting his fate, I know that is an improbable behavior for an ultramarine, but the idea was cool for a screenshot. The pic should get this, if not, well, I'm not doing my job right.
Canon is important man! But using the same model over and over again wasn't getting me a good result.
@Everest: As Joazz said it's from a dow 2 blood ravens pack. It's very low-poly though, I wonder why the peeps in the spacemarine thread didn't replicate such badass weapon!
Maybe you should've made him appear exhausted or wounded or something. It'd make much more sense.
Trying a differente angle
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[QUOTE=Zak McKracken;43996514]Trying a differente angle
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Not what I was expecting :v:
Try the latter of suggestions here, and when I say move back and zoom in; not that kind. When you move back, zoom in a little so the empty spaces aren't visible. Practice makes perfect as always.
EDIT: You know how to zoom in right? Hold right click, drag forward and back. Holding right click and drag left and right rotates it.
Man, I... I didn't about that. Noobz spotted :V
You opened me a world <3
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[QUOTE=Zak McKracken;43998037]Man, I... I didn't about that. Noobz spotted :V
You opened me a world <3
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Wee bit better.
Experiment and see what you come up with and [URL="http://facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=1250275"]post[/URL] here instead. I probably now can see potential as long as you practice.
Zak, what's your steam name?
Original angle is pretty symmetric & good, all you have to do is step back and zoom in closer to get rid off the fish-eye effect
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