Hunter's Prey - Garry's Mod

[B]I'm just learning about making comics. Tell me what you think.[/B] [IMG]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/9962/sprey.jpg[/IMG]

Kind a short don't you think?

[QUOTE=Exorade;31457018]Kind a short don't you think?[/QUOTE] I think example should be short. Think about looong shitty comic to read xD. Better start with short ones.

[QUOTE=Tazz88;31457103]xD[/QUOTE] You won't last long here boy...

[QUOTE=minilandstan;31457689]You won't last long here boy...[/QUOTE] Don't really care about your opinion kiddo. That kind of posts lead to nothing. Also replies like that make me laugh. Good job...

[QUOTE=Tazz88;31457804]Don't really care about your opinion kiddo. That kind of posts lead to nothing. [I][U]Also replies like that make me laugh.[/U][/I][/QUOTE]The total mass of irony in this sentence is crushing me.

What's that glowing orb thing in all three pictures?

I was wondering that too.

Looks like a muzzleflash emitter that he forgot to remove.

[QUOTE=-Ben_Wolfe-;31458121]What's that glowing orb thing in all three pictures?[/QUOTE] Was trying to make projectile from plasma caster. But it's not as good as it should be...

this comic is stupid as fuck and poorly made [highlight](User was banned for this post ("Unhelpful Reply" - Asaratha))[/highlight]

Can you use Super DOF next time?

[QUOTE=Tazz88;31459621]Was trying to make projectile from plasma caster. But it's not as good as it should be...[/QUOTE] So, is it like, supposed to be coming at them? Because it's just kind of... there.

[QUOTE=butler_;31460299]this comic is stupid as fuck and poorly made[/QUOTE] You can think what you want. But if I were you I'd start working on your posing.... Because your artwork is ehem..

You know those plasma casters generally make a noticable sound when fired, right? [editline]31st July 2011[/editline] Also who the fuck holds a gun like that?

[QUOTE=-Ben_Wolfe-;31460453]So, is it like, supposed to be coming at them? Because it's just kind of... there.[/QUOTE] As I said, I'm a beginner and still learning.

[QUOTE=Tazz88;31460472]You can think what you want. But if I were you I'd start working on your posing.... Because your artwork is ehem..[/QUOTE] my posing what, it's better then yours lmao.

Get the posing down first then make comics.

shit, sorry tazz.. didnt mean to rate you dumb i clicked on the wrong account

hahahaahahahahahahghasldfaa what the fuck is this [editline]1st August 2011[/editline] and how is it impossible for someone to be watching someone else

[QUOTE=butler_;31460676]shit, sorry tazz.. didnt mean to rate you dumb i clicked on the wrong account[/QUOTE] you know you could change the rating by clicking on another one. being a gold member you should know that. [editline]1st August 2011[/editline] oh wait, you bought yours

why is it grey plus, why is it so short... even for an example, at least make it more exiting to look out then just one guy speaking in each frame

[editline]1st August 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=777ecnatsiser;31460940]why is it grey plus, why is it so short... even for an example, at least make it more exiting to look out then just one guy speaking in each frame[/QUOTE] Good to know.. I'll try to make it better next time. [editline]1st August 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=butler_;31460676]shit, sorry tazz.. didnt mean to rate you dumb i clicked on the wrong account[/QUOTE] If you think you rate ME by rating post then you must be as dumb as idea that you can complete mario by going left.... I hope you have more luck when you aim while pissing than you have trying to insult me

are you getting angry over a rating? lol

[QUOTE=butler_;31462657]are you getting angry over a rating? lol[/QUOTE] I ain't angry and don't care about rating... I see you still don't get it.. My last post in this thread. Go lol somewhere else mate

but but you think im insulting you for rating you dumb because i literally clicked on the wrong account to rate dumb

Too much filter, not really interesting posing and the whole thing could have been fit into a single screen. It's pretty mediocre.

[QUOTE=butler_;31460299]this comic is stupid as fuck and poorly made[/QUOTE] You're a douche.

[QUOTE=Exorade;31465691]You're a douche.[/QUOTE] :(( im sorry

You chose relatively good camera angles for all three shots, although you forgot to zoom in. I was also confused by your attempt at a plasma ball, next time edit in one, or at the very least use the hl2 plasma ball effect. Speech bubbles were nice, the layout is pretty solid. Keep practicing, don't let trolls anger you, just ignore them. Seriously.. Just ignore them.