Decided to start redoing every picture I hated back in the day I made it. So here is number one:
Critism is appreciated!
Early Version:
[url]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/195/4/1/Spy_vs_Sniper_by_The_Combine.jpg[/url]
New Version:
[IMG]http://uppix.com/f-pl_thundermounta4e70f372000d2a0a.jpg[/IMG]
The snipers arms look wrong.
I think the posing is too stiff.
My main complaint is the rain. Too small, too 2D(there should be dozens of variations in sizes because it rains all over, not just on one axis) and it should be splattering.
Original looked better IMO.
I feel as if the rain should be bouncing on them
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