I dont really even know the story of this comic. Basically its just some bad ass man in a post-apocalyptic world.
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I'll continue this if ye want.
Its usually a good idea to have a story before making a comic. Otherwise, screenshots are generally the way to go.
The story is that this man doesnt know what the hell happened few years back when the world went boom. He just tries to survive his own way. :iiam:
Cant see comic.
EDIT:
Nevermind.
Also, work on your posing in general. Cant tell if he is angry or sad or somthing.
[QUOTE=juGGa;23446006]The story is that this man doesnt know what the hell happened few years back when the world went boom. He just tries to survive his own way. :iiam:[/QUOTE]
If only that was in the comic at all...
You need to work out a story, or you will get random scenes with no red thread what so ever. Comic lay out was nicely done though.
[QUOTE=Rastifan;23448046]Comic lay out was nicely done though.[/QUOTE]I strongly disagree. Everything in this needs work - posing, editing, story... Everything.
My suggestion? Go back to the drawing board, check some comics, and start over.
[QUOTE=Mythos;23448352]I strongly disagree. Everything in this needs work - posing, editing, story... Everything.
My suggestion? Go back to the drawing board, check some comics, and start over.[/QUOTE]
Im only just starting. But thanks anyway, im making the second page.
And the quality may not be perfect because im not on my own computer so i dont have so much time to do this.
If you don't have time now, make it later. It's better to be patient and come up with something good, right?
Yeah... the world doesn't look destroyed... If you're trying to make a Fallout 3 comic, you failed at it. :v:
Well alright i'll continue it later. In a week or so.
Damn scavengers! Taking stuff from no one! I better kill them!
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