"Hold up! I spot an unknown contact in the house at 12 O' Clock!" (Two versions)

[aNoire]

I'm still starting posing and making screenshots, so please critisize.

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[url=http://uppix.net/1/a/6/56d36be7ff6828e86c2b9f949824f.html][img]http://uppix.net/1/a/6/56d36be7ff6828e86c2b9f949824f.jpg[/img][/url]

What do you think?

EDIT: CRAAP! Just saw that I forgot to pose his hand on the foregrip. I posed it, put did not make him fully grip it. My bad.

[Blitzkrieg Zero]

Well. Nice. The first version is better, IMO. Some of them look a bit stiff, but otherwise its good for someone just starting.

[Yujin110]

Finger posing on the guy on the left seems off.

[aNoire]

[QUOTE=yujin110;32651015]Finger posing on the guy on the left seems off.[/QUOTE] "EDIT: CRAAP! Just saw that I forgot to pose his hand on the foregrip. I posed it, put did not make him fully grip it. My bad."

Yeah, I noticed that afterwards. It sucks, but oh well.

[AttemptedPants]

Me gusta the coloring on the first one, how did you do it?

[aNoire]

I'll PM you about it.