• "You there! stop! Identify yourself!" Infected soldier moves toward Army evac. outpost.
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[B]Only[/B] In-game editing. I think I pulled it off very well. [img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/rp_necro_forest_a100012.jpg[/img] C&C as always.
Everything is to small and out of focus, the soldiers are to far away for the zombie to be blurred, honestly. You should have them closer or have a different camera angle. Having the L4D crew is so cliche, its too generic, try having some different civilians walking in or maybe no one at all. The posing is off too, it does not look like they're actually saying "You there! stop! Identify yourself!", rather just looking at him, the posing on them is pretty poor anyway, they look too stiff. The area also looks a bit empty, perhaps if you added a few props in and made it look like the soldiers had themselves somewhere to sit, a table with something on it etc. That's all I have to say, really. Nice idea, not quite pulled off right.
This isn't really good. at all
Butthoe.^
[QUOTE=Vasili;19518994] The posing is off too, it does not look like they're actually saying "You there! stop! Identify yourself!", rather just looking at him, the posing on them is pretty poor anyway, they look too stiff. The area also looks a bit empty, perhaps if you added a few props in and made it look like the soldiers had themselves somewhere to sit, a table with something on it etc. [/QUOTE] what do you mean the posing is stiff? and I added some stuff but you cant see it because of the fog, which i didnt take in mind while posing.
[QUOTE=Uncle_Earl;19519398]what do you mean the posing is stiff? and I added some stuff but you cant see it because of the fog, which i didnt take in mind while posing.[/QUOTE] By stiff they're too straight, their limbs look stuck together and not relaxed like humans usually are.
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