S.T.A.L.K.E.R. Military Vanguard Perched Above A Guard Tower On A Misty Day - Garry's Mod

[IMG]http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/qq280/wallyroberto/stalkermilitarycopy.png[/IMG] My first picture, I saved it as a PNG. C&C Please :3

Editing is pretty good, but the posing is odd. Overall pretty good for a first picture.

It actually was not posed, I took the picture in HGN's Stalker Roleplay Server.

Then you get less points.

needs to be isolated before dodging

[QUOTE=CptLemons;19499784]needs to be isolated before dodging[/QUOTE] I actually think that makes it look sort of cool

[QUOTE=Back_Slash;19502773]I actually think that makes it look sort of cool[/QUOTE] [IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/ralphexploit.png[/IMG] @Picture Like everybody said isolate before dodging/burning and pose the models yourself. Everything else seems pretty cool.

[QUOTE=The Combine;19503380]psot[/QUOTE] you totally killed it.

[QUOTE=stea1th;19503496]you totally killed it.[/QUOTE] Spenny is gay.

His name is ralph and its awesome.

[QUOTE=The Combine;19503558]His name is ralph and its awesome.[/QUOTE] who ralph

You go to LMAO thread

[QUOTE=The Combine;19503764]You go to LMAO thread[/QUOTE] You make no sense to me.

[QUOTE=Dr. Jim Dean;19503549]Spenny is gay.[/QUOTE] He's just too god damn serious in all the competitions.

Dumb Dumb

Well, a thread with potential has been killed by someone who spends too much time in LMAO threads. Anyways, I'll isolate next time when I'm shading.

[QUOTE=hgncommand;19504176]Well, a thread with potential[/QUOTE] editing pictures with npcs is not a potential

[QUOTE=Ohforf;19504240]Thread with potential? A picture of a NPC raped in photoshop. Yeah son, this got's lots of them poo-tenti-ools[/QUOTE] I believe it was a player, actually.

What Freakie just said. You know, this is the screenshots section, not the YOU MUST POST RAGDOLLS OR DIE section.

NPC = No posing skill. But if you really want some critism mate: NPC Very very low res texture on the left and on the ground You didnt isolate before shading Overcontrasted Even the sky and the background looks low-res Thread with potential? *insert ralph here*

Thanks combine, and please read the thread. It's been said at least twice it is not an NPC, but a player. [editline]08:50PM[/editline] [QUOTE=Ohforf;19510910]Nope. Look at the hand, that is probably a combine/rebel NPC with a modelswap. Now that I look at it, it's a combine NPC. Look how he is walking, that is not a player[/QUOTE] :rolleyes: I've said it twice already that is is a Playermodel from an RP server. The animation for a player changes when the weapon is holstered. Not. An. NPC.

This edit took like an hour, it's not sloppy. Give me some tips to improve the editing.

Isolate the model everytime. Its the number 1 rule IMO.

[QUOTE=hgncommand;19510988]This edit took like an hour, it's not sloppy.[/QUOTE] Most of my edits take at least two or three hours, and my good pictures usually take closer to four, some as much as six. One hour is nothing, really.

Except that you're chesty, and that you're one of the best editors here.

[QUOTE=hgncommand;19511387]Except that you're chesty, and that you're one of the best editors here.[/QUOTE] Maybe, maybe not, but perhaps I'm "one of the best editors here" because I can edit a picture for six hours, sit back and look at it, edit it some more and then post it. Then I can take criticism, go away and build on [i]the same picture[/i] and repost an improved version. Then I can use any criticism on later pictures, and slowly build my way up and up.

Sorry to bump a few days. But: The computer I edited on died, and I'm using a really bad computer (W98 and 700 Mhz) I was going to post a new updated version, but now the HDD might have to be wiped, which makes me sad. Once I get it fixed, I'll follow the help everyone gave here, thanks a bunch.

You really had to bump this, had you?