• Ellis jumping of a cliff and shooting a gunship
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[IMG]http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g316/dominoegnallange/DominoEdit.jpg[/IMG] I saw the move AVATAR just recent, and I wanted to do something that could, and was inspired by it. I ended up with a bit cheating in order to get Ellis as big as he is, and so on.. I didn't do anything with the shadows on the foliage, neither the color scheme, but it came out pretty nice :) About 12 hours all in all :3 Scene build in Gmod, and edited in Photoshop :) [B]Original:[/B] [url]http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g316/dominoegnallange/unedit.jpg[/url] [B]Compare:[/B] [url]http://comparescreenshots.slicx.com/comparison/30916[/url] Superscatman also did an edit on this for me in the OEMS [I](Official Edit My Screenshot)[/I] [img_thumb]http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k112/poopipoopoo/booooom.jpg[/img_thumb]
Oh my Ellis, don't run into its engine now D:, Artistic work!
Hm, the colors still don't quite seem right, the water is still too blue. Some of the lighting on Ellis looks a little thick and the dirt flying off his shoes is incredibly thick. Smoke is also rather thick. Explosion looks cool though, as do the muzzleflash and lighting on the gunship. And the scene building is very well done. Though overall it isn't as impressive as some of your previous stuff.
[QUOTE=The Vman;19586316]Hm, the colors still don't quite seem right, the water is still too blue. Some of the lighting on Ellis looks a little thick and the dirt flying off his shoes is incredibly thick. Smoke is also rather thick. Explosion looks cool though, as do the muzzleflash and lighting on the gunship. And the scene building is very well done. Though overall it isn't as impressive as some of your previous stuff.[/QUOTE] I wanted it to be purdy in many different colors! :D The light is a matter of taste I guess, the leg have a flat surface, therefor a larger light reflection. Does Ellis look thick? O.o what the? I failed miserably on the dirt, although I wanted it to be some chunks instead of just.. "powder" The smoke was hand drawn, and I spent a good amount of time trying to get it right, but meeh.. It didn't turn out as good as I wanted it to. Thanks :) And no, It's not as impressive as some of my other stuff ;)
editing is poor other then the explosion.
[QUOTE=Domino;19586354]Does Ellis look thick? O.o what the?[/QUOTE] [QUOTE=The Vman;19586316][B]Some of the lighting[/B] on Ellis looks a little thick...[/QUOTE]
The explotion and Ellis's leap saves this picture for me. Artistic it is. And what the hell is he shooting with?
SAXTON HAAAALE! *Caps*
Just some constructive criticism [img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/4421/hallor.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=masterfgh;19587725]Just some constructive criticism [img_thumb]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/4421/hallor.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE] My response :P [IMG]http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g316/dominoegnallange/Lolbla.jpg[/IMG]
made me think about both G.I.Joe (the movie) and X-Men Origins :v:
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Really interesting picture but the the aspects of the editing that Master pointed out are really detrimental. Overall I think Superscatman's edit is better, although certain parts of your editing is better (the cockpit, for example).
He's looks better in the grass, the smoke, and the over all color scheme. I didn't want to change the color scheme, as you guys know, when I do a picture, I do alot of image adjustments in-game. My smoke came out bad, 'cause it was the first time I've ever drawn smoke from scratch, and I failed to show that the gun had already moved a good foot.. :P I'm going to do a boobjob on Vman's latest picture ;)
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