Nothing spectacular here, just a simple edit.
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/alma.jpg[/IMG]
Originals:
[URL="http://filesmelt.com/dl/gm_construct0002123456789101112131415161718192021.jpg"]Here[/URL]
[URL="http://filesmelt.com/dl/gm_construct00031234567891011121314151617181920212223242526.jpg"]And here[/URL]
Freaky.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-_DvoDzAqyY&feature=related[/media]
Thread music! Oh yeah
Dark but thats the whole point, I like.
More like:
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-GjJ0zwajiE[/media]
Stop creeping me out, thats just creepy.
Just a suggestion: use post processing to bring out thecolor and lighting in the eyes by turning up the contrast. I would also fool around with some lights to where it displays more of her shoulders exposed in outline. Also, the image is too big in size to compare with the focus point of your picture. If I were you, I would zoom in more or just cut the left side of the picture out completely, it doesn't seem like you're using it.
Typically a professional will use focus points to convey their ideas and their point of interest to direct the viewers eye. For example, having someone on the far right of your picture running towards the right of your picture can help to convey their journey which can also be represented by adding footprints but that's a different story.
Overall, the image is very basic and I don't think you spent too much time on it. You're making it somewhat hard for me to criticise this image because i can't judge what I can't see. The picture is good, it just doesn't reach my expectations.
[QUOTE=Kurit;24255044]Just a suggestion: use post processing to bring out thecolor and lighting in the eyes by turning up the contrast. I would also fool around with some lights to where it displays more of her shoulders exposed in outline. Also, the image is too big in size to compare with the focus point of your picture. If I were you, I would zoom in more or just cut the left side of the picture out completely, it doesn't seem like you're using it.
Typically a professional will use focus points to convey their ideas and their point of interest to direct the viewers eye. For example, having someone on the far right of your picture running towards the right of your picture can help to convey their journey which can also be represented by adding footprints but that's a different story.
Overall, the image is very basic and I don't think you spent too much time on it. You're making it somewhat hard for me to criticise this image because i can't judge what I can't see. The picture is good, it just doesn't reach my expectations.[/QUOTE]
Have you tried leaning forward? I can see her just fine on my computer.
And I already brought out the eyes enough IMO. Also, the focal point of the image is Alma herself, which is really the only thing in the image.
Sorry for not meeting your expectations.
Alma Wade stop hiding in the dark.
[QUOTE=slayer20;24255395]Have you tried leaning forward? I can see her just fine on my computer.
And I already brought out the eyes enough IMO. Also, the focal point of the image is Alma herself, which is really the only thing in the image.
Sorry for not meeting your expectations.[/QUOTE]
For my 32 inch I have to stand up to see it better. I shoulden't have to do that, honestly. I really do like your style, though.
I'm aware of your picture's focus, I just don't think you went in-depth enough to bring that out, heck, it's an art in itself. I guess I don't expect you to know this stuff.
The eyes are lit enough, what I believe the main problem to be is how much space is wasted in this image. In comparison, the main focus, her eyes, just aren't brought out enough amongst all this space. That is not artistic to do so.
I see her fine. Like this one. I wish there was a hi res version of her out there.
Have art. I always loved the Fear game. The first one that is.
That's just downright creepy...:gonk:
You like it mad, don't lie.
[QUOTE=madmanmad;24258792]That's just downright creepy...:gonk:[/QUOTE]
Come on Mad. You and Alma would hit it off well.
She is killing from left to right while you sit in a corner giggling softly and occasionally try to discipline the wall for being a lousy conversation parter.
I could have sworn Gustave just killed her.
[QUOTE=madmanmad;24258792]That's just downright creepy...:gonk:[/QUOTE]
She just wants a hug! You should give her one :3
[QUOTE=slayer20;24259017]She just wants a hug! You should give her one :3[/QUOTE]
No he shouldn't. No one likes to be on the floor looking at what once was your internal organs about 3 meters away from your head.
[QUOTE=Rastifan;24259061]No he shouldn't. No one likes to be on the floor looking at what once was your internal organs about 3 meters away from your head.[/QUOTE]
tell that to gustave.
[QUOTE=Rastifan;24258930]Come on Mad. You and Alma would hit it off well.
She is killing from left to right while you sit in a corner giggling softly and occasionally try to discipline at the wall for being a lousy conversation parter.[/QUOTE]
See, perfect match.
Now that I think about it, I should have saved it as a .gif and hinted that it might be animated, while not actually making it animated.
I'm sure that'd mess some people up.
Too fucking dark.
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