Swift as the wind - Garry's Mod

So, a couple years ago when I was just starting out with gmod I made this piece of shit: [img_thumb]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/248/e/c/swift_as_the_wind_by_wotman-d5dqhal.png[/img_thumb] So I decided, why not try and completely redo the picture now that i'm better at gmod, so I did. I also tried experimenting with some stuff I wanted to try, any criticism that can help me improve is welcome. Yes, this is a scenebuild. [img]http://orig13.deviantart.net/da34/f/2015/079/3/3/swift_as_the_wind__redo__by_kokyal0rd-d8mfoez.png[/img]

amazing

It's far better than the first. My only complaint is the running man's posing, too stiff. I feel like what you should have done is what I always do when I get stuck with the posing or when my rag dolls don't look right: Actually get up from the chair, imitate the posture/stance/body position you're trying to pose, and pay close attention to exactly what you are doing, and simply replicate it in Gmod for a good looking pose that looks 'right'.

Neat

I really really like this. The tracer doesn't seem to be behaving correctly (if it was a tracer, it would be lighter. If it was smoke, it would get darker when it enters a darker light source). You did something really cool with the searchlight though instead of going with a typical one colored cone of light. Anyways, I love it. Keep it up.

BSAA plain clothes as police, interesting. It looks really great, not sure what else to say.

Reminds me a bit of the Matrix.

the cops look bored

[QUOTE=Joazzz;47366695]the cops look bored[/QUOTE] "Dammit this kid's running on rooftops again, fucks sake..."

Sunglasses at night, and rooftop chases, what's not to like?

I think the door on the right is disproportionately sized with respect to the police. You could've fixed this by posing the guy in the background closer to the camera.

I know this thread is old, but where did you get those police models? People keep using these awesome models and i can't find them, it bugging me!

-snip, didn't read thread date-

[QUOTE=AGS;47945523]I know this thread is old, but where did you get those police models? People keep using these awesome models and i can't find them, it bugging me![/QUOTE] Can't you read? [QUOTE=bloocobalt;47363759]BSAA plain clothes as police, interesting.[/QUOTE]

[QUOTE=rama2299;47948603]Can't you read?[/QUOTE] Yeah, but where did he get it?

Umh, on the BSAA SOU thread maybe? On bloo's profile? On the Workshop too?

[QUOTE=rama2299;47950442]Umh, on the BSAA SOU thread maybe? On bloo's profile? On the Workshop too?[/QUOTE] Stop with the rude shit please.

Rude? I'm not being rude, i didn't even insulted you [editline]13th June 2015[/editline] Plus, you could have PM'd him in a first place instead bumping the thread with no sense.