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Might be last stand contest entry..
I couldn't find a good angle, Cc please.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UtMKFdeHF9o&feature=related[/media]
69105 and rossum please post about how you hate black bars and how much fail my posing is and my editing.
[b] Back story [/b]
[quote] 2 gun dealers are getting framed by government, the unequiped mercenary was given the job to kill the two men, and steal their products. These men have been selling weapons to enemies, and giving away positions.[/quote]
smoking is bad, kills the lungs man
[QUOTE=Sergeyev;25080789]smoking is bad, kills the lungs man[/QUOTE]
You can easily compensate that with exercise, which is what I do.
Thanks for cc! :)
Green is the new brown.
:v:
[QUOTE=ttam6297;25080769]
69105 and rossum please post about how you hate black bars and how much fail my posing is and my editing.[/QUOTE]
ttam6297 please blow off criticism just because you think you're somehow above it, and oh, why not snipe at a few members you don't like while you're at it. prick.
not that you give a fuck for honest crit (plainly), but here's some anyway.
angle is boring. pan the camera down rather than up. crate is fucked, use a different model or photoshop it to repair the obvious holes in the mesh. posing on the two foreground guys is alright, if a little plain, but the assassin (particularly his hands) is not. weapons on top of the crate seem to have just been dumped there haphazardly to try and make it look less boring; at least add some shadows cast by them. in fact, concentrate less on applying a shitty green overlay to everything (it could be fucking pink for all i care, it still has the same effect as making the whole picture brown for no reason - it makes it look bad) and spend that time on going through and working on the lighting and shadows. oh, and since you obviously already know black bars are pointless, it is beyond me as to why you added them.
i keenly await your denial of everything i've just said and your indignant little rant about how you're perfect and what i've said is all just 'opinions' and how you do what you want, because you're all grown up now and mommy and daddy can't tell you what to do so neither can i.
of course, i'd be really fucking happy if you did the opposite and actually took that in and fixed it in your next picture (who knows, i might even regain some of the respect you immediately lost yourself by your snide little comment in that post), but i honestly don't expect it from someone who seems so hellbent on being [i]a rebel[/i] and fighting [i]the man[/i] (or at least, his criticism).
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also if the theme is last stand, you may want to rethink this. i doubt it's the assassin's last stand, as he has the drop on them both; by the same token, they can't make much of a stand if they're both dead before they know what the fuck.
we dont need individual threads for everyones contest entries thats what the CONTEST thread is for :/
[QUOTE=Hairybastard;25080809]You can easily compensate that with exercise,[/QUOTE]
You can't.
why are their heads so big? it's a balaclava, not a wool sweater.
I quite like the angle in this shot, it looks as though you screencapped a scene from a movie with the lighting and the way the guy is just about to pop the first guy's head...but not quite yet :)
[QUOTE=Hairybastard;25080809]You can easily compensate that with exercise, which is what I do.[/QUOTE]
Or you could not smoke and exercise, which is better again.
[QUOTE=Hairybastard;25080809]You can easily compensate that with exercise, which is what I do.[/QUOTE]
That isn't exactly how it works...
[QUOTE=Hairybastard;25080809]You can easily compensate that with exercise, which is what I do.[/QUOTE]
"Cancer? Hahah what? No. I jog."
Smoking also weakens physical performance, so exercising is no excuse.
[QUOTE=rossmum;25082666]ttam6297 please blow off criticism just because you think you're somehow above it, and oh, why not snipe at a few members you don't like while you're at it. prick.
not that you give a fuck for honest crit (plainly), but here's some anyway.
angle is boring. pan the camera down rather than up. crate is fucked, use a different model or photoshop it to repair the obvious holes in the mesh. posing on the two foreground guys is alright, if a little plain, but the assassin (particularly his hands) is not. weapons on top of the crate seem to have just been dumped there haphazardly to try and make it look less boring; at least add some shadows cast by them. in fact, concentrate less on applying a shitty green overlay to everything (it could be fucking pink for all i care, it still has the same effect as making the whole picture brown for no reason - it makes it look bad) and spend that time on going through and working on the lighting and shadows. oh, and since you obviously already know black bars are pointless, it is beyond me as to why you added them.
i keenly await your denial of everything i've just said and your indignant little rant about how you're perfect and what i've said is all just 'opinions' and how you do what you want, because you're all grown up now and mommy and daddy can't tell you what to do so neither can i.
of course, i'd be really fucking happy if you did the opposite and actually took that in and fixed it in your next picture (who knows, i might even regain some of the respect you immediately lost yourself by your snide little comment in that post), but i honestly don't expect it from someone who seems so hellbent on being [i]a rebel[/i] and fighting [i]the man[/i] (or at least, his criticism).
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also if the theme is last stand, you may want to rethink this. i doubt it's the assassin's last stand, as he has the drop on them both; by the same token, they can't make much of a stand if they're both dead before they know what the fuck.[/QUOTE]
I'm willing to take your critism, I just hate how you put it out there and some retarded comments you make, yes you give some of the best critizism, I have great respect for you. You just sometimes can be a really big dick, but then again you are just going to say, if you yell its going to make everything better.
I hate black bars, your posing sucks and your editing is shit.
AM I A PROFESSIONAL GMOD POSER NOW?!
I'm joking.
[QUOTE=Stopper;25093273]I hate black bars, your posing sucks and your editing is shit.
AM I A PROFESSIONAL GMOD POSER NOW?!
I'm joking.[/QUOTE]
I really needed that motivation. Thanks :)
Good Stuff.
Boring Stuff.
ttam6297 Stuff.
[QUOTE=Hairybastard;25080809]You can easily compensate that with exercise, which is what I do.[/QUOTE]
Wow, I have never read a more misinformed statement in my entire life!
[QUOTE=Hairybastard;25080809]You can easily compensate that with exercise, which is what I do.[/QUOTE]
Hey guys smoking is okay now exercising directly prevents cancer and gets rid of the tar in your lungs.
Also, these pictures are so freaking boring.
Make something new and interesting. Instead of these shitty Modern Warfare 2 pictures. I mean like yea cool they look ok, but I think most of us are getting sick of the Call of Duty crap. Unless it's actually good.
[QUOTE=Ginseng;25096888]Make something new and interesting. Instead of these shitty Modern Warfare 2 pictures.[/QUOTE]
I really need the inspiration thread, this is a shitty scene build, I sat around for 3 hours just throwing around different ragdolls, I think I did 10 different poses. This one I choose.
[QUOTE=ttam6297;25096959]I really need the inspiration thread, this is a shitty scene build, I sat around for 3 hours just throwing around different ragdolls, I think I did 10 different poses. This one I choose.[/QUOTE]
Well like it's ok. I mean I can't do what you can do with photoshop because I'm still learning. But most things I've seen on here were all mw2 stuff. I mean yes this is good in my opinion, but I'd like to see something other than call of duty stuff.
[QUOTE=Joazzz;25085171]Smoking also weakens physical performance, so exercising is no excuse.[/QUOTE]
not to detract from this obvious truth, but a guy i was at kapooka with somehow avoided this one.
he was in his mid-late 40s (either that or he just looked a few decades older than he was), smoked heavily, drank heavily, had a beer gut the size of me on him. you would expect this guy to collapse into a heap and start hurking up bloody foam the moment anyone even mentioned pt.
as it happens, he beat EVERYONE, including fitness-obsessed 18- and 19-year-olds, on the 2.4km run. and by over a minute, too.
i still have no idea how it was even possible, but it definitely happened. none of us could believe it.
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oh and i'm a rude dude deal with it
Momentum?
Wow.
Because he wants to give them a fucking hug
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;25085143]"Cancer? Hahah what? No. I jog."[/QUOTE]
Uhm, what? He said it fucks up your lungs, as in uhh I forget the english word.. but yeah your breath capacity or whatever.
And I'm not afraid of getting cancer through smoking, the chances of getting cancer from smoking is about as high as getting hit by a car when crossing the street with a green walk light. Besides, chances of getting cancer from fat is much much higher. Anywho, I didn't want to derail this.
Nice picture, altho the posing could use some work, and since you absolutely wanted black bars, atleast give it a more cinematic and dramatic camera angle, both for the black bars making sense and for the picture being intense, as is what you wanted to achieve according to my understanding.
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[QUOTE=Joazzz;25085171]Smoking also weakens physical performance, so exercising is no excuse.[/QUOTE]
That isn't a permanent effect, it is only a slight weakening a short time period after you have smoked. And it really isn't a big deal, I take a cig right before gym every time, and I still get 5's in gym (6 is the highest grade we can get)
Ofcourse I know smoking is dangerous for your health, and in no way good. However, I can still see many more positive things than negative about it.
although i am not a smoker and will never be one, i kinda have to admit the whole 'IT WILL GIVE YOU CANCER' argument loses a damn lot of weight every time they discover yet another totally mundane thing which will maybe kill you. potato chips and wine (which they told us only a few years ago will help)? fuck off. i would not be surprised if literally everything could cause cancer in the right circumstances, so why not enjoy yourself and die young rather than have a shit life and then live to be so old it gets even worse because you can no longer say "well fuck this" and turn your life around?
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that said, only a few people are afforded the rare privelege of being allowed to smoke within my airspace, i don't want to get your dirty cancer air
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wait how the fuck did this thread segue into lung cancer? i'm confused now
[QUOTE=Hairybastard;25107981]However, I can still see many more positive things than negative about it.[/QUOTE]
Looks cool, bro.
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